Summer Haiku 36

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Placed first in : Shaped Haiku Poetry Contest sponsored by JCB Brul

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thriveni c mysore

Date: 7/2/2025 6:50:00 PM

ooooo! bed of roses sure. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 7/3/2025 10:44:00 AM

Thank you Triveni for your kind wishes. It was a fun write for pleasure in between tougher stuff. Wish you a cheerful evening.

Valsa George

Date: 7/1/2025 9:52:00 PM

Hi Krish,your perfumed nuptial bed made me smile. Congratulations on your first place win.

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 7/3/2025 10:41:00 AM

Thanks for your kind wishes Valsa. It was fun designing something for last minute entry into a shape haiku. Wish you a smiling evening.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2025 9:51:00 PM

Back with congrats. Way to go.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/27/2025 10:43:00 AM

This is beautiful. Not sure it will matter in a Contest but I count one syllable too many

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/30/2025 11:42:00 AM

I cross my fingers for you

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 6/27/2025 12:03:00 PM

Thank you dear poetess. It was a last minute entry as I was not keen to enter the contest because of the shape requirement, on which my attention was focussed. Now corrected. I don`t know whether it will be too late.