Krishnanand Guptar Poet Haiku

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Placed first in : Shaped Haiku Poetry Contest sponsored by JCB Brul

Summer Haiku 36

  Summer Haiku  36
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                                                               I     ~o~ o~        ~o ~o~    I 
                                                               I  ~ o \o /~o ~    ~o\o/ o~  I 
roses in bloom                                          I      ~\o/~            ~\o/~     I  
                                                               I         II                   II        I
          close beside a bridal room~             I_ _ _  II_ __ __ _ __ II_ _ _I
		
	       nuptial bed perfumed.	               I~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~~I 
                                                               I . .   .   .  .   .   .  .  . .  . I 
	                                                        I . .  .   .  .   .  .   .  .  .  .I
                                                                I~ ~ ~   ~   ~   ~ ~ ~ ~I

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thriveni c mysore July 2, 2025 at 6:50 PM ooooo! bed of roses sure. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!! Krishnanand Guptar July 3, 2025 at 10:44 AM Thank you Triveni for your kind wishes. It was a fun write for pleasure in between tougher stuff. Wish you a cheerful evening.

Valsa George July 1, 2025 at 9:52 PM Hi Krish,your perfumed nuptial bed made me smile. Congratulations on your first place win. Krishnanand Guptar July 3, 2025 at 10:41 AM Thanks for your kind wishes Valsa. It was fun designing something for last minute entry into a shape haiku. Wish you a smiling evening.

Andrea Dietrich July 1, 2025 at 9:51 PM Back with congrats. Way to go.

Andrea Dietrich June 27, 2025 at 10:43 AM This is beautiful. Not sure it will matter in a Contest but I count one syllable too many Andrea Dietrich June 30, 2025 at 11:42 AM I cross my fingers for you Krishnanand Guptar June 27, 2025 at 12:03 PM Thank you dear poetess. It was a last minute entry as I was not keen to enter the contest because of the shape requirement, on which my attention was focussed. Now corrected. I don`t know whether it will be too late.