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Summer Gone By

So whimsical was that fine summer’s day, Radiant one moment and dull the next. So tenacious was that fine summer’s day, The day spanned long, and the night watched, perplexed. O here comes July, the height of summer, Cicadas sing and young pink daisies dance. Alas, cyclamens blossom and summer Grows dumber; the sky’s tears fall in a trance. Erelong, ere we know it, August creeps in, A chill seeps through and the cold comes drifting. Like a storm, a tempest, August sweeps in, Summer packs up – wait, where are you going? The summer meant naught to last, however, The season turns; nothing lasts forever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/24/2015 7:52:00 AM
Euphonious, this is deep :) have a nice day ~SKAT~
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Euphonious Elysium
Date: 1/24/2015 9:25:00 AM
Haha xD Well I did spend a considerable amount of time on this one - it was actually a graded Literature assignment. This is my first sonnet ever, and the structure is so difficult to work with, especially since I'm an amateur and have had very little experience with poems!
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Euphonious Elysium
Date: 1/24/2015 9:25:00 AM
I completely botched the iambic pentameter. :( I was really just dying on the inside. I hope I was able to successfully convey the message of this sonnet though. xD Thanks for stopping by!

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