joe borg Poet Rhyme

summer gone

The heat has gone the sun slowed down 

And its rays went out of town, 

It just left us in the cold 

In our shivers growing mould, 

Need replacement for the heat 

Back again that feeling sweet, 

To feel the heat right on the cheek 

So much good for the physique, 

A replacement I must find 

One that’s sweet a one that’s kind, 

Perhaps an image does the trick 

And watch your wares with every click, 

That would surely warm my heart 

As it was right from the start, 

Cause when I first laid eyes on you 

Felt all the veins burning right through. 

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Alison A Smith October 8, 2026 at 5:11 AM The rhyming couplets give this poem a playful rhythm, while the shift from summer’s warmth to the warmth of love is charming. The humorous touches make the longing feel light-hearted and affectionate.