Doris Culverhouse Poet Rhyme

Summer Fun

.                                Lazy day
                         Friend come and play, today
                     Mama has cupcakes and lemonade.
 
        The swift creek is cool and fishing's fine, in the shade
              Let's play marco polo and don't let the fun fade
                Let's pick blueberries while we have sun

                       And visit Granny some.
                               Summer Fun!



For Jared's contest trois-par-huit 8 line poem with rhymes.
aab bbc cc (I know it is too late for the contest) I still wanted to try one!

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Michael Gelb July 2, 2010 at 3:25 PM Very good I liked your poem. I only started writing poems since my wife died in 2009 I can relate to rhyming poems better than others. As you can tell from my poems. A lot of poems I don’t understand and I would hate to give a wrong comment. I want my poems to honor my wife long after I’m gone. Thank you What is Marco Polo?

Michael J. Falotico June 24, 2010 at 4:01 PM That makes me feel warm and happy... well done ..Thank you for that wonderful feeling..

Gert W. Knop June 24, 2010 at 4:07 AM Hi Doris, you reminded me of my own youth and I loved picking blueberries and blackberries in the forest!!! Nicely penned and thank your for your kind comments always....Gert

Marie Harrison June 23, 2010 at 7:20 PM Oh this is cute. Sounds like a fun day. Can I come?

Susan Mills June 23, 2010 at 12:42 PM Good luck in the contest! Enjoyed! Love, Susan

Caryl Muzzey June 23, 2010 at 9:46 AM A wonderful write, I hope it is not too late. I enjoyed the read. Caryl