Timothy Mcguire Poet Limerick

Summer Fun

was headed for some summer fun
to the beach in the blazing sun
but the day was hazy
it made me quite lazy
people just thought I was a bum

Summer Laziness Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Mohan Chutani
6/2/20

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Aditi Mishra June 22, 2020 at 1:12 AM Summer days definitely make us lazier than we usually are. Congratulations on your win Timothy :) Timothy Mcguire June 22, 2020 at 2:53 PM Thank you so much Aditi! :)

Tom Cunningham June 19, 2020 at 8:22 AM No chance of being a bum, it's like winter here, congrats on your win. Tom Tom Cunningham June 19, 2020 at 3:59 PM Haha no chance Timothy Mcguire June 19, 2020 at 3:25 PM Thanks Tom, no skinny dipping over there then!

Mohan Chutani June 18, 2020 at 8:43 PM Timothy, congratulations for your placement in my contest. Best. Mohan. Timothy Mcguire June 18, 2020 at 9:07 PM thank you Mohan! :)

Funom Makama June 8, 2020 at 9:10 PM Most profound expressions of your deep thoughts. A great, great piece! Timothy Mcguire June 8, 2020 at 9:28 PM thank you Funom

Line Gauthier June 7, 2020 at 1:01 AM Fun take on the prompt, Timothy.

Lindsay Laurie June 3, 2020 at 8:48 PM G'day Timothy … sounds like a jealous crowd Timothy. They need to relax - thanks Timothy - Lindsay Timothy Mcguire June 3, 2020 at 10:02 PM Right, I wish I had the time to be a bum.....:)

Tom Cunningham June 3, 2020 at 4:54 AM The hot sun drains me too, maybe Im a bum lol. Timothy Mcguire June 3, 2020 at 6:32 PM I hope to retire and practice my bums skills soon.

Jan Allison June 3, 2020 at 3:11 AM lol with lock down I'm not seeing many beach bums of any description on our local beach! thanks for the smile:-) hugs Jan xx Timothy Mcguire June 3, 2020 at 6:32 PM You are welcome Jan! :)