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Summer Fun

was headed for some summer fun
to the beach in the blazing sun
but the day was hazy
it made me quite lazy
people just thought I was a bum

Summer Laziness Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Mohan Chutani
6/2/20

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Aditi Mishra Date: 6/22/2020 1:12:00 AM Summer days definitely make us lazier than we usually are. Congratulations on your win Timothy :) Login to Reply Timothy Mcguire Date: 6/22/2020 2:53:00 PM Thank you so much Aditi! :)

Tom Cunningham Date: 6/19/2020 8:22:00 AM No chance of being a bum, it's like winter here, congrats on your win. Tom Login to Reply Tom Cunningham Date: 6/19/2020 3:59:00 PM Haha no chance Timothy Mcguire Date: 6/19/2020 3:25:00 PM Thanks Tom, no skinny dipping over there then!

Mohan Chutani Date: 6/18/2020 8:43:00 PM Timothy, congratulations for your placement in my contest. Best. Mohan. Login to Reply Timothy Mcguire Date: 6/18/2020 9:07:00 PM thank you Mohan! :)

Funom Makama Date: 6/8/2020 9:10:00 PM Most profound expressions of your deep thoughts. A great, great piece! Login to Reply Timothy Mcguire Date: 6/8/2020 9:28:00 PM thank you Funom

Line Gauthier Date: 6/7/2020 1:01:00 AM Fun take on the prompt, Timothy. Login to Reply

Lindsay Laurie Date: 6/3/2020 8:48:00 PM G'day Timothy … sounds like a jealous crowd Timothy. They need to relax - thanks Timothy - Lindsay Login to Reply Timothy Mcguire Date: 6/3/2020 10:02:00 PM Right, I wish I had the time to be a bum.....:)

Tom Cunningham Date: 6/3/2020 4:54:00 AM The hot sun drains me too, maybe Im a bum lol. Login to Reply Timothy Mcguire Date: 6/3/2020 6:32:00 PM I hope to retire and practice my bums skills soon.

Jan Allison Date: 6/3/2020 3:11:00 AM lol with lock down I'm not seeing many beach bums of any description on our local beach! thanks for the smile:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Timothy Mcguire Date: 6/3/2020 6:32:00 PM You are welcome Jan! :)