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Summer Fling

Steamy sultry night
Stars and lovers hearts ablaze
Midnight encounter


Copyright © 2009   Lena “Lolita” Townsend



Inspired by Abe Lopez ~ Haiku Seasons Contest

Copyright © Lena Townsend | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 4/26/2009 12:59:00 PM Creative use alliteration in this concise poem. Nice use of imagery. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen Login to Reply

L'Nass Shango Date: 4/23/2009 8:21:00 AM I read this and immediately went to look up Chris Higgins commentary ... it is both the sort of thing he would write and should love ... I agreed with him completely ... the alliteration gives an indescribable edge of sultriness. best of luck inthe contest. Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 4/22/2009 6:07:00 AM Ooh, this brings back awesome memories my dear. : ) Romantic and sizzling imagery on a summer's night! Good luck in the contest. Love, Shar Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 4/21/2009 11:36:00 PM Best wishes with this one Lolita.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments Login to Reply

C. E. Mcmullin Date: 4/21/2009 5:30:00 PM Lena, where do I buy the DVD?? Anyway, Grand use of form and thought, from a most talented poet, one for the favorite file- poet butterfly Login to Reply

Robin Maughan Date: 4/21/2009 11:34:00 AM Vivid and steamy Haiku.. Very well done! Hgs and Peace, Robin Login to Reply

Laura Mckenzie Date: 4/21/2009 7:21:00 AM Lovely use of imagery! Laura :) Login to Reply

Walker Neese Date: 4/21/2009 7:10:00 AM thank you for your comments lena Mr.lopez is my teacher Login to Reply

Frank F. Atanacio Date: 4/21/2009 5:57:00 AM sign me up! Login to Reply

Christopher Higgins Date: 4/21/2009 5:25:00 AM So many thoughts goes through my mind asI read this steamy Haiku...lovely imagery in all three lines..well done my friend. Login to Reply