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Summer Fling

Steamy sultry night Stars and lovers hearts ablaze Midnight encounter Copyright © 2009 Lena “Lolita” Townsend Inspired by Abe Lopez ~ Haiku Seasons Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 4/26/2009 12:59:00 PM
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Creative use alliteration in this concise poem. Nice use of imagery. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen
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Date: 4/23/2009 8:21:00 AM
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I read this and immediately went to look up Chris Higgins commentary ... it is both the sort of thing he would write and should love ... I agreed with him completely ... the alliteration gives an indescribable edge of sultriness. best of luck inthe contest.
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Sharon Winter
Date: 4/22/2009 6:07:00 AM
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Ooh, this brings back awesome memories my dear. : ) Romantic and sizzling imagery on a summer's night! Good luck in the contest. Love, Shar
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Brian Strand
Date: 4/21/2009 11:36:00 PM
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Best wishes with this one Lolita.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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C. E. Mcmullin
Date: 4/21/2009 5:30:00 PM
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Lena, where do I buy the DVD?? Anyway, Grand use of form and thought, from a most talented poet, one for the favorite file- poet butterfly
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Robin Maughan
Date: 4/21/2009 11:34:00 AM
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Vivid and steamy Haiku.. Very well done! Hgs and Peace, Robin
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Laura Mckenzie
Date: 4/21/2009 7:21:00 AM
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Lovely use of imagery! Laura :)
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Walker Neese
Date: 4/21/2009 7:10:00 AM
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thank you for your comments lena Mr.lopez is my teacher
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Frank F. Atanacio
Date: 4/21/2009 5:57:00 AM
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sign me up!
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Christopher Higgins
Date: 4/21/2009 5:25:00 AM
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So many thoughts goes through my mind asI read this steamy Haiku...lovely imagery in all three lines..well done my friend.
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