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Summer Fling

Steamy sultry night
Stars and lovers hearts ablaze
Midnight encounter


Copyright © 2009   Lena “Lolita” Townsend



Inspired by Abe Lopez ~ Haiku Seasons Contest

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April 26, 2009 at 12:59 PM

Creative use alliteration in this concise poem. Nice use of imagery. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen

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April 23, 2009 at 8:21 AM

I read this and immediately went to look up Chris Higgins commentary ... it is both the sort of thing he would write and should love ... I agreed with him completely ... the alliteration gives an indescribable edge of sultriness. best of luck inthe contest.