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Aug. 8, 2024       23.37pm

Ben’s family is now at Aqua World, Their fondest summer moment shines like gold; His father takes all the rides, He and his siblings are guides, While mother’s secret swimming strokes unfold.

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Date: 8/23/2024 8:04:00 AM
A funny Summer Limerick Contest Judged: 8/18/2024 5:41:00 AM Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Place 3 (up to 5 multi-w)
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Date: 8/23/2024 6:43:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
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Len Gasun
Date: 8/23/2024 7:57:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 8/19/2024 1:59:00 PM
Cute one, sweetie. Congrats
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Len Gasun
Date: 8/23/2024 7:55:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear poet freind Andrea for reading my poem, your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 8/18/2024 2:19:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun Limerick write again. Hugs...  Have a fun day writing away...................
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Len Gasun
Date: 8/23/2024 7:53:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem again my dearest poet friend Paula and your warm congratulatory comments. Have a fun day writing away too. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 8/18/2024 9:24:00 AM
Len, congratulations on your winning placement with your fun limerick.
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Len Gasun
Date: 8/23/2024 7:49:00 AM
Thank you so miuch for acknowledging my poem in your contest my dear poet frriend Tania, God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 8/17/2024 10:24:00 PM
Now I am wondering what mom's secret swimming strokes are. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Len Gasun
Date: 8/23/2024 7:48:00 AM
Ha ha ha ha. I think a lot my dear poet friend. Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting comments .God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 8/9/2024 4:40:00 AM
Dear Len, What a delightful limerick, full of little surprises. It was fun reading it this morning. Keep Writing! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Len Gasun
Date: 8/10/2024 7:27:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging comments and the blessings my dear poet friend Daniel. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 8/8/2024 1:19:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your fun Limerick  write. A hot summer with cool water sounds like fun for all ages..... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a blessed day writing away..........
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Len Gasun
Date: 8/10/2024 7:26:00 AM
I'm so glad you enjoyed it my dearest poet friend. Thank you so muc for reading my poem, your inspiritng words, and good wishes. My best wishes to you as well. Hugs

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