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Aug. 8, 2024       23.37pm


Ben’s family is now at Aqua World,
Their fondest summer moment shines like gold;
His father takes all the rides,
He and his siblings are guides,
While mother’s secret swimming strokes unfold.

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Date: 6/8/2025 2:05:00 PM
What a sweet lim I found in your oldies, Len. Hope you are doing well
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Len Gasun
Date: 6/9/2025 8:23:00 AM
Hello my dear poet friend Andrea. With God's favor I'm doing fine despite my increased teaching load this school year which is proportional to my age dear. As age increases, and so with workload, lol. Well, I know God will not give me a job which I cannot do without Him dear. Thank you so much for reading my oldy. How about you? Hope you're doing well too. I'll send you a soupmail v, soon, ok. God bless.
Date: 8/23/2024 8:04:00 AM
A funny Summer Limerick Contest Judged: 8/18/2024 5:41:00 AM Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Place 3 (up to 5 multi-w)
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Date: 8/23/2024 6:43:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
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Len Gasun
Date: 8/23/2024 7:57:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 8/19/2024 1:59:00 PM
Cute one, sweetie. Congrats
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Len Gasun
Date: 8/23/2024 7:55:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear poet freind Andrea for reading my poem, your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 8/18/2024 2:19:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun Limerick write again. Hugs...  Have a fun day writing away...................
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Len Gasun
Date: 8/23/2024 7:53:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem again my dearest poet friend Paula and your warm congratulatory comments. Have a fun day writing away too. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 8/18/2024 9:24:00 AM
Len, congratulations on your winning placement with your fun limerick.
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Len Gasun
Date: 8/23/2024 7:49:00 AM
Thank you so miuch for acknowledging my poem in your contest my dear poet frriend Tania, God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 8/17/2024 10:24:00 PM
Now I am wondering what mom's secret swimming strokes are. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Len Gasun
Date: 8/23/2024 7:48:00 AM
Ha ha ha ha. I think a lot my dear poet friend. Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting comments .God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 8/9/2024 4:40:00 AM
Dear Len, What a delightful limerick, full of little surprises. It was fun reading it this morning. Keep Writing! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Len Gasun
Date: 8/10/2024 7:27:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging comments and the blessings my dear poet friend Daniel. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 8/8/2024 1:19:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your fun Limerick  write. A hot summer with cool water sounds like fun for all ages..... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a blessed day writing away..........
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Date: 8/10/2024 7:26:00 AM
I'm so glad you enjoyed it my dearest poet friend. Thank you so muc for reading my poem, your inspiritng words, and good wishes. My best wishes to you as well. Hugs
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