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Aug. 8, 2024       23.37pm

Summer Family Fun


Ben’s family is now at Aqua World,
Their fondest summer moment shines like gold;
His father takes all the rides,
He and his siblings are guides,
While mother’s secret swimming strokes unfold.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Dietrich Avatar
June 8, 2025 at 2:05 PM
What a sweet lim I found in your oldies, Len. Hope you are doing well
Gasun Avatar
June 9, 2025 at 8:23 AM
Hello my dear poet friend Andrea. With God's favor I'm doing fine despite my increased teaching load this school year which is proportional to my age dear. As age increases, and so with workload, lol. Well, I know God will not give me a job which I cannot do without Him dear. Thank you so much for reading my oldy. How about you? Hope you're doing well too. I'll send you a soupmail v, soon, ok. God bless.
Gasun Avatar
August 23, 2024 at 8:04 AM
A funny Summer Limerick Contest Judged: 8/18/2024 5:41:00 AM Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Place 3 (up to 5 multi-w)
Agustin Avatar
August 23, 2024 at 6:43 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
Gasun Avatar
August 23, 2024 at 7:57 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 1:59 PM
Cute one, sweetie. Congrats
Gasun Avatar
August 23, 2024 at 7:55 AM
Thank you so much my dear poet freind Andrea for reading my poem, your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 2:19 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun Limerick write again. Hugs...  Have a fun day writing away...................
Gasun Avatar
August 23, 2024 at 7:53 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem again my dearest poet friend Paula and your warm congratulatory comments. Have a fun day writing away too. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Kitchin Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 9:24 AM
Len, congratulations on your winning placement with your fun limerick.
Gasun Avatar
August 23, 2024 at 7:49 AM
Thank you so miuch for acknowledging my poem in your contest my dear poet frriend Tania, God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Kendrick Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 10:24 PM
Now I am wondering what mom's secret swimming strokes are. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Gasun Avatar
August 23, 2024 at 7:48 AM
Ha ha ha ha. I think a lot my dear poet friend. Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting comments .God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Rodgers Avatar
August 9, 2024 at 4:40 AM
Dear Len, What a delightful limerick, full of little surprises. It was fun reading it this morning. Keep Writing! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Gasun Avatar
August 10, 2024 at 7:27 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging comments and the blessings my dear poet friend Daniel. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 1:19 PM
I enjoyed reading your fun Limerick  write. A hot summer with cool water sounds like fun for all ages..... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a blessed day writing away..........
Gasun Avatar
August 10, 2024 at 7:26 AM
I'm so glad you enjoyed it my dearest poet friend. Thank you so muc for reading my poem, your inspiritng words, and good wishes. My best wishes to you as well. Hugs
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