Summer Drizzle

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August. 18.2024

Trimeric Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Janice Canerdy

Raindrops merrily dance and fall. Soft music enlivens mind. Soothing rhythm, calming all. Alongside blows the susurrus wind. Soft music enlivens mind. A symphony so sweet and light. Sun veiled, but shines bright. Soothing rhythm, calming all. Summer rain cools the earth. Creating in every heart a playful mirth. Alongside blows the susurrus wind. As it sweeps, tender leaves rustle, And slender trees bend and shuffle.

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/28/2024 11:05:00 PM

Soothing indeed, dear Valsa. This poem flows perfectly. Loved it. Blessings.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/18/2024 8:57:00 PM

this offering nourishes the soul,valsa...definitely flowing through its calm, charmed lines!

Jay Narain

Date: 8/18/2024 10:32:00 AM

Beautiful poem.

Ink Empress

Date: 8/18/2024 6:32:00 AM

Dear sweet valsa, what a soothing and calming poem this is, i love the rhymes and cadence of your poem and also how descriptive as always it is, especially love the lines “Soft music enlivens mind. A symphony so sweet and light. Sun veiled, but shines bright.” The seamless flow of alliterations and depth of what youv conveyed there truly is impressive! I can hear the sound of dancing raindrops too as i read this. Sometimes rain does feel soothing, its been raining alot here in maldives! Pleasure reading this! Sending you light a new fave this is

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/17/2024 10:11:00 PM

I like the sound of rain that is non-threatening, also, a gentle breeze on a hot summer day or in spring. It seems to add such ambiance to the day or afternoon or a summer night. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K