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21 May 2026

summer delight

sun-lit windowpane
bright-eyed sparrow peeking in
summer guest arrives
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George Avatar
June 26, 2026 at 5:45 AM
Congratulations dear Jez on your win with this beautiful haiku
Kendrick Avatar
June 21, 2026 at 5:05 AM
Whoa!! Way to go with this winner. Congratulations to you. Sara K.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 13, 2026 at 12:09 PM
Congratulations on your win. I am peeking in to read this cute write. Have a blessed weekend with your win.................
Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2026 at 12:06 PM
What a cute picture you painted. Congrats
Rodrigues Avatar
June 13, 2026 at 10:18 AM
A sweet scene! Congrats!
Kitchin Avatar
June 13, 2026 at 5:45 AM
JCB, congratulations on your first place win with your sweet summer haiku. Love the imagery of the bird peeking in.
Gasun Avatar
May 31, 2026 at 7:21 PM
Gorgeous haiku my dear poet friend. Love its fantastic imagery. Thanks a lot for sharing. Best wishes always. Hugs
Croft Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 1:36 AM
very beautiful image!
Wolf Avatar
May 25, 2026 at 7:43 PM
I cannot resist this comment, b/c oft-times I am as I've always been, an absolute jerk. So, here goes: "Spare me." Isn't that awful? ~ Twisted Pickle
Etgen-Baker Avatar
May 25, 2026 at 4:25 PM
a perfect Haiku!
Hind Avatar
May 24, 2026 at 11:42 PM
very nice <3 !!
Buehler Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 2:25 PM
What a pleasant surprise! I enjoyed this a lot, JCB.
George Avatar
May 22, 2026 at 9:02 PM
Lovely haiku. Sad, sparrows are becoming extinct in our locality. ... may be due to climate change. All the best dear Jez.
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