Summer Day Freedom

Dandelion
    Golden floweret,
          Nurturing nectar.

Fluffy puffball,
     Beauty in the wind.
          Summer day
               Freedom!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Callus Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 8:13 AM
You certainly managed to paint a vivid eye-catching picture, Linda...and I like the ending. Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul
Fowler Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 8:14 AM
Thanks for stopping by with kind comments Paul. Linda
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October 2, 2020 at 5:01 AM
Linda, way to go - congratulations my friend and a beautifully vivid picture you posted which got you a top win. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
Fowler Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 5:37 AM
Hi Jennifer, thank you for stopping by with nice words! {} Linda
Dulal Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 12:39 AM
Congratulation diju
Fowler Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 5:36 AM
Thank you! Linda
Wolf Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 5:58 PM
Aw, very sweet, Linda! Love seeing those puffballs before their inevitable demise. Congrats on your win in the contest! :) gw
Fowler Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 6:00 PM
Hi gw! Thank you for the stop-by and lovely encouraging comment! laf
Ranaweera  Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 2:12 PM
A great musical painting!! Congratulations on your 1st Place Win, Linda!!
Fowler Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 2:30 PM
Thank you for the nice comments Newton. :) Linda
Evans Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 1:43 PM
Congrats on your win!!! Summer is really freedom to do more fun things. Although it was curtailed this summer.
Fowler Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 2:05 PM
Many thanks Marilene! Linda
Watt Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 9:23 AM
Nice depiction of both the dandelion and the summer freedoms it represents. Congrats on your #1 win, Linda! ~ John
Fowler Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 10:17 AM
Many thanks for the congrats John, and the kind words :) Linda
Woodrow Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 8:54 AM
oh this is one of my faves in this contest...summer freedom is certainly dandelions parachuting away :)
Fowler Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 9:18 AM
Thanks Susan. They're so feisty and carefree :) Linda
Andresen Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 5:06 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Linda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Fowler Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 5:17 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise! And congrats to you as well! ;) Linda
May Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 4:19 AM
Wonderful write Linda, Congrats on your win..
Fowler Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 5:14 AM
Many thanks Joseph! Thank you for sponsoring such a fun contest, Linda
Daniel Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 12:09 AM
Beautiful description of the flower floating free in the air, Linda, congratulations on your win:)
Fowler Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 5:18 AM
Thank you Jo. Congratulations to you too! Linda
Wolf Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 7:10 PM
This picture is a blue-ribbon prize-winner, Linda! Love it! G.L. in the contest! :) gw
Fowler Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 5:56 AM
Thank you gw. Your comments are always welcome and encouraging. laf
Sands Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 1:26 PM
Nice poem. I enjoyed :)
Fowler Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 3:43 PM
Thank you Heidi! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Linda
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