Summer Crown

Winter forgotten 

Sunbeams undressed cloudy sky  

Summer wears its crown






(c) Demetrios Trifiatis

     19 June 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Devnath  Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 12:28 PM
Beautiful picture of summer nature. A 7. Loved always my lovely genius friend. Loved always, bl
Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 3:53 PM
you need to do more haiku. this is a wowser
Trifiatis Avatar
June 21, 2016 at 5:52 AM
I have followed your advise! Visit! Thank you!
Quigley Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 8:48 PM
Very nice, Demetrios! I love the way clouds melt away in the sun.
Trifiatis Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 5:17 AM
Thank you so much dear, Tom, for your precious visit and comment!
Thirtyseven Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 8:41 AM
Oh I wish. Winter is very much in here, with cold mornings, and dark skies. Though we do occasionally get those beautiful crisp winter days, the gems that they are. Much like your words above.
Trifiatis Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 4:06 PM
Yes, I know very well the weather there my friend, scott. Unfortunately I cannot change it but you always could visit Greece if you can stand the heat. Yesterday we had 40 today 42! Thank you for your visit and lovely comment!
Allison Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 7:18 AM
absolutely delightful - long may the sun reign:-) hugs Jan xx
Trifiatis Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 4:00 PM
Here in Greece we have full summer for over six months, sometimes more! I remember years started bathing in the sea end of March and went on till November! Thank you, Jan! Hugs xx
Andresen Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 6:55 AM
- Summer time is so short in Norway, I have always winter in my thoughts - but enjoying every day the sun shines :) - Beautifully written, my friend :) - A 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 4:03 PM
Summers in Greece are too long, so whenever you bored with the weather there you can always visit Greece! Thank you so much for your precious visit!
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