Summer Comfort

Within the white cloaked sky
          Bright blue legs move beneath the cloth
             Transformation becomes imminent
   As day presents itself through flowing movement
      With gentle rays, like arms, pushing the cloak
      Eyes become affixed on the beauty of the sky
   As total serenity is found within the depth of color
And the heat of the sun becomes a blanket of safety
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 12:28 AM
Beautiful Poem. It is a skyscape in words. Very nice. Dane
Mckenzie Avatar
August 27, 2008 at 1:01 PM
Michael wonderful write Congratulations on your win! Laura :)
Winter Avatar
June 13, 2008 at 2:04 PM
A beautiful write Michael. Congratulations on your win in Kristin's contest. Love, Shar
Stella Avatar
June 13, 2008 at 7:23 AM
congraats dear friend on this being chosen in Kristens contest stunning work as always keep up the great work and let that beauty continue to flow
Brown Avatar
June 13, 2008 at 7:20 AM
Congratulations on your win in Kristin's contest Michael . Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
June 13, 2008 at 1:04 AM
Congrats on your success in Kristin's contest Michael.Rgds Brian
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June 12, 2008 at 6:28 PM
I like the peaceful feel and visually interesting format of this poem. Congratulations on being one of the Celebrating Nature contest winners. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
Reynolds Avatar
June 12, 2008 at 4:37 PM
Congrats my friend on your win in my contest - you know how much i love this poem (that same line Brian quoted is my fave!) brilliant! Thanks for entering it, this is awesome! Congrats, Love Kristin
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