Nette Onclaud Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Summer Comes

Luscious  is  August
With minty fragrance
Enlivening  vales;
As grasses renew
Their sizzled display.

Awakens now
The red of morns--
Outside my gate
Flowers  explode:

Arms  outstretched
I  begin
To race, dance--

Winds hail
‘SUMMER

COMES!’


Diminishing Hexaverse Contest
Sponsor: Emile Pinet   5/22/2020
Checked via howmanysyllables.com

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Andrea Dietrich May 23, 2020 at 8:36 PM Brilliant. I bet it scored high!! Congrats .

Janice Canerdy May 23, 2020 at 7:38 PM Nette, CONGRATS on your win. Janice

Connie Marcum Wong May 23, 2020 at 12:03 PM This flows so smoothly Nette. You make this form shine! Congratulations on your wonderful win! Blessings xxoo

Aditi Mishra May 23, 2020 at 4:14 AM Dropping by to congratulate you on your win Nette :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders May 22, 2020 at 7:57 PM A beautiful summer scene, Nette! xx Rhonda

Emile Pinet May 22, 2020 at 4:10 PM Congratulations Nette! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, it was a very tough contest to judge but your beautiful poem successfully caught my attention, well done my friend, Emile.

Jeanne Mcgee May 22, 2020 at 8:48 AM This is a wonderful hexaverse Nette! How lush is August! All the best in a high placement in the contest.

Aditi Mishra May 22, 2020 at 6:08 AM A really picturesque and soothing imagery for the onset of summer. All the best Nette :)