Mohan Chutani Poet Sijo

Summer Challenge

I need to travel other side of river to bring back my folk,
In coming summer and share hopes of a warmer future,
crossing invisible bridges will be a difficult challenge.




Sijo: Syllable count =46 (16/14/16)
Sponsor Debbie Guzzi
Contest Name: Sijo Strings
Date 09/06/2014

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Andrea Dietrich July 3, 2014 at 10:28 PM good to see you on the winner's list, my friend. Congratulations.

Poet Destroyer A July 3, 2014 at 11:40 AM nice win Mohan...PD

Dr.Ram Mehta July 3, 2014 at 6:17 AM Quite a different approach to the summer love, heartfelt and touching , Mohan, Congrats on the win Mohan Chutani July 3, 2014 at 7:26 AM Since Sijos originate from Korea, in my Sijo I put the imagery of families on the two sides of the divide that yearn to be united. Thanks Dr. Ram for your wishes. Mohan

Pandita Sietesantos July 2, 2014 at 4:05 PM Hi Mohan, congratulations on a well-deserved fine win! Beautiful write! Kindest regards. Mohan Chutani July 3, 2014 at 12:04 AM Thanks Pandita. Since Sijos originate from Korea, in my Sijo I put the imagery of families on the two sides of the divide that yearn to be united. Mohan

Arlene Smith July 2, 2014 at 2:05 PM Congrats on a great win with this clever write, Mohan my friend! Hugs.. Arlene Mohan Chutani July 3, 2014 at 12:01 AM Thanks Arlene. Mohan

Andrea Dietrich June 10, 2014 at 5:50 PM HI, there, it was fun to read your sijo. Good luck in the contest.