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Summer Breeze, Gentle Breeze

When the summer breeze comes along my way, It freshens me up and makes me to sway, Gently, I feel like dancing and swinging, Soft, this summer breeze makes me go singing... Chorus: Summer breeze, gentle breeze, All my languishing flees, Summer breeze, gentle breeze, Brings me joy, brings me peace. When the summer breeze blows its cool incense, It lightens me up and calms every sense, Children around me feeling a tingling, With summer comes the ice cream man jingling... Chorus: Summer breeze, gentle breeze, All my languishing flees, Summer breeze, gentle breeze, Brings me joy, brings me peace. Bridge: Feel the whistling summer breeze Rustling through the verdant leaves, Feel the breeze gently singing Summer's here - good news bringing... Chorus: Summer breeze, gentle breeze, All my languishing flees, Summer breeze, gentle breeze, Brings me joy, brings me peace.

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/15/2018 9:44:00 AM

Congrats on your top win, Jo.

Joseph May

Date: 8/12/2018 7:18:00 PM

Congrats on your win Jo

John Hamilton

Date: 8/12/2018 1:20:00 PM

Very beautiful lyric Jo, I can picture this as a song, especially liked the bridge, congrats on a second place!

Eve Roper

Date: 8/8/2018 11:24:00 PM

This is beautiful, Jo, I'm not to sure how to write one , but I did try.. luck in the contest

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/4/2018 9:11:00 AM

Your poem flies with ease and style..a happy poem.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 8/4/2018 8:46:00 AM

Ahh, it is a really wonderful lyrical poem, certainly a joy to read,you have certainly given a really nice picture of summer breeze,especially the ice cream man coming, in my town from last 10 years I am seeing the same person, everyday in summer he comes and sell ice creams, to his freezer (which has wheels) is attached a boofer and it sings the song of Walls (company of ice cream) and that's how we know that he is there, anyway I enjoed reading your poem,good luck and have a really nice day

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/4/2018 8:43:00 AM

jo, your melody delights... love the flow of your lyrics.. huggs