Summer Breeze

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It’s sand, sun and fun The taste of salt on your lips Wind fanning your hair Edward J Ebbs - 6/19/15 Written for a Contest, Picture Perfect Haiku #2

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/15/2015 2:54:00 PM

Ed, stopping by to enjoy the breeze and imagery... Love LINDA

Edward Ebbs
Date: 7/16/2015 11:55:00 PM

If you can taste the salt on your lips when the breeze is in the right direction :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2015 9:32:00 PM

ohhh, i really like this one. I'm a summer baby. Congrats on the win.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/25/2015 8:49:00 AM

Indeed this is picture perfect! Congrats.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/25/2015 4:05:00 AM

fantastic haiku Ed congrats on placing hugs

Skat A

Date: 6/25/2015 1:26:00 AM

Ed... Congrats, thank you for the entry. The picture is done right! **SKAT**