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Summer Breeze

It’s sand, sun and fun
The taste of salt on your lips
Wind fanning your hair

Edward J Ebbs - 6/19/15


Written for a Contest, Picture Perfect Haiku #2

Copyright © Edward Ebbs | Year Posted 2015

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Poet Destroyer A

July 15, 2015 at 2:54 PM

Ed, stopping by to enjoy the breeze and imagery... Love LINDA

July 16, 2015 at 11:55 PM

If you can taste the salt on your lips when the breeze is in the right direction :)

Andrea Dietrich

June 25, 2015 at 9:32 PM

ohhh, i really like this one. I'm a summer baby. Congrats on the win.

Richard Lamoureux

June 25, 2015 at 8:49 AM

Indeed this is picture perfect! Congrats.

Shadow Hamilton

June 25, 2015 at 4:05 AM

fantastic haiku Ed congrats on placing hugs

June 25, 2015 at 1:26 AM

Ed... Congrats, thank you for the entry. The picture is done right! **SKAT**

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