Summer Breeze

A warm summer breeze
touched the side of her cheek
it caressed slowly
in a loving way
trying to get her attention
it swooned around her
wrapping lovingly
trying to awaken her

It was changing
direction and temperature 
bringing in a seasonal storm
with a slow puff and then
a magnificent one
she called attention
to her sleeping subject
just as the first raindrop fell.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 8/27/2019 12:44:00 AM
The elements of nature can be so pleasant until the hot air clashes with cold. This is so enchanting Phyl. I love the way you ended this! : ) xxoo
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 8/27/2019 12:13:00 PM
Fall is on the way Connie and nights are getting cooler. So wet that harvest is a bit delayed this year. Hoping for a long fall. love phyl
Date: 8/26/2019 6:11:00 PM
Hello Phyllis … nicely written on blending idyllic weather integrated into your partnership - thank you Phyllis - Lindsay
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 8/26/2019 7:29:00 PM
Hello my friend nice to see you here today. It was a nice day but a bit windy. Watching it and sitting outside gave me inspiration. love phyl
Date: 8/26/2019 4:48:00 PM
Nature has a way of giving us a turn at any given moment, its nice when we have someone to share it with, lovely poem dear Phyllis, winning wishes are being sent, love xo
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 8/26/2019 7:27:00 PM
Thanks so much for your lovely comment. love phyl
Date: 8/26/2019 2:10:00 PM
what a lovely gentle poem - hope you are well, my friend x
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 8/26/2019 7:27:00 PM
Thanks Jack. love phyl
Date: 8/26/2019 11:25:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Phyllis ... you describe it so softly ... like a breeze with love :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/26/2019 12:46:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise. Have had a writing block for a while and sitting watching the breeze in the trees today gave me a poem. Nature at it's best. love phyl
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