Summer Breeze

Long walks in pleasant sun, The ocean scent of blazing blue. In the Carolinas we have our fun. Our wedding vows become brand new. Summer breeze waff of silky hair, The salty seas and coconut tan. A slow rowing boat lifts all our cares. We’re building a castle on the sand. The waters tickle our ankles and knees, A warmth and coolness on bare skin. Undulating up and down with ease, the waves spur our love to win. Summer breeze waff of silky hair, The salty seas and coconut tan. A slow rowing boat lifts all our cares. We’re building a castle on the sand. A brightness illuminates by candlelight. Our youthful exuberance excites the stars. The black breezy sky in full moonlight heals all toils, troubles and wanderlust scars. Summer breeze waff of silky hair, The salty seas and coconut tan. A slow rowing boat lifts all our cares. We’re building a castle on the sand. 8/9/2018 4th place/multiple placements Summer Breeze Contest Sponsor: John Hamilton
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Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 4:04 AM
Congratulations on your win, Kim. Wonderful lyric.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 5:44 AM
Thank you, Subimal!
Hamilton Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 1:32 PM
Well done Kim, congrats on a fine placement!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 7:45 PM
Thank you, John!
Godwin Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 1:05 PM
Well done, so very lovely. I was captivated, willingly so. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Rodrigues Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 5:51 PM
Poetry hugs, dear CayCay! Thank you!
Pandit Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 9:00 AM
I like the way your story flows, Kim.. interwoven with nature and being in the moment with the loved one. The last line of refrain stands out for me. Beautiful lyrics. Best for a TOP win.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 10:51 AM
Thanks so much! Same to you, my friend!
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