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Summer Breeze

Long walks in pleasant sun,
The ocean scent of blazing blue.
In the Carolinas we have our fun.
Our wedding vows become brand new.

Summer breeze waff of silky hair,
The salty seas and coconut tan.
A slow rowing boat lifts all our cares.
We’re building a castle on the sand.

The waters tickle our ankles and knees,
A warmth and coolness on bare skin.
Undulating up and down with ease,
the waves spur our love to win.

Summer breeze waff of silky hair,
The salty seas and coconut tan.
A slow rowing boat lifts all our cares.
We’re building a castle on the sand.

A brightness illuminates by candlelight.
Our youthful exuberance excites the stars.
The black breezy sky in full moonlight
heals all toils, troubles and wanderlust scars.

Summer breeze waff of silky hair,
The salty seas and coconut tan.
A slow rowing boat lifts all our cares.
We’re building a castle on the sand.

8/9/2018

4th place/multiple placements 
Summer Breeze Contest
Sponsor: John Hamilton

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Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 8/13/2018 4:04:00 AM Congratulations on your win, Kim. Wonderful lyric. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/13/2018 5:44:00 AM Thank you, Subimal!

John Hamilton Date: 8/12/2018 1:32:00 PM Well done Kim, congrats on a fine placement! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/12/2018 7:45:00 PM Thank you, John!

CayCay Jennings Date: 8/11/2018 1:05:00 PM Well done, so very lovely. I was captivated, willingly so. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/11/2018 5:51:00 PM Poetry hugs, dear CayCay! Thank you!

Vijay Pandit Date: 8/9/2018 9:00:00 AM I like the way your story flows, Kim.. interwoven with nature and being in the moment with the loved one. The last line of refrain stands out for me. Beautiful lyrics. Best for a TOP win. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/9/2018 10:51:00 AM Thanks so much! Same to you, my friend!