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Summer Breeze

Gliding on the hills of forests you arise Awakening the dawn of sapphire sunrise Riding with the winds, twirling in my trees Your invisible form no one ever sees Softer than a touch, you're a seductive tease Caressing my lips, like a romantic kiss Courting with ease, you're my summer breeze Blowing in my garden, gentler than the winds, you aim to please Whistling on my walks, you let me breathe, a sigh of cool relief Whiffing on the nectar, you liven flowers, flirting with the bees Rustling the leaves, you buzz my air, my happy summer breeze Hugging the expanse of emerald greens Amber vegetation you flutter in the fields Waving turquoise waters gently you kiss Under the purple-skies donning amethyst Softer than a touch, you're a seductive tease Caressing my lips, like a romantic kiss Courting with ease, you're my summer breeze Blowing in my garden, gentler than the winds, you aim to please Whistling on my walks, you let me breathe, a sigh of cool relief Whiffing on the nectar, you liven flowers, flirting with the bees Rustling the leaves, you buzz my air, my happy summer breeze You go on picnics swirling with the kids Flying their kites into lavender peaks Soothing summer-vibes in reveling eyes Greeting evenings of amber-fired skies Softer than a touch, you're a seductive tease Caressing my lips, like a romantic kiss Courting with ease, you're my summer breeze Blowing in my garden, gentler than the winds, you aim to please Whistling on my walks, you let me breathe, a sigh of cool relief Whiffing on the nectar, you liven flowers, flirting with the bees Rustling the leaves, you buzz my air, my happy summer breeze August 9, 2018 Placed 3rd in Summer Breeze contest by John Hamilton NOTE: The sequence is: verse, pre-chorus, chorus

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Date: 10/14/2018 10:20:00 AM
Hi Vijay, much belated congratulations on your win with this excellent poetic gem. A most creative work, giving the wind such a seductive quality. What wonderful visions fill the mind as I read this special jewel. A golden song from a golden pen Vijay. May your pen ever run gold. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike. A fave.
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Date: 8/20/2018 3:05:00 PM
Your summer breeze is blissfully seductive, Vijay. Belated congratulations on your win. Regards // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/24/2018 2:49:00 PM
Thank you Paul.
Date: 8/19/2018 7:38:00 AM
Your lovely poem is exquisite Vijay! You give the wind personality that enchants! : )
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/19/2018 6:13:00 PM
Thank you Connie.
Date: 8/17/2018 8:09:00 AM
wow.. great imagery... You did this very well.. It was like I was there..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/18/2018 4:39:00 PM
Thank you Silent One.
Date: 8/16/2018 7:27:00 PM
hello, vijay...are you on vavacy with your muse?... huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/17/2018 7:23:00 AM
Not writing for contest..no rush..thanks. nette.
Date: 8/16/2018 4:14:00 PM
Vijay, Your Soft Summer Breeze sings a beautiful song that will hit the top 10 of the Billboard Charts!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/17/2018 7:22:00 AM
Thank you Chuck..you are the expert my friend when it comes to lyrics.
Date: 8/16/2018 8:19:00 AM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. This is SO beautiful, Vijay! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/17/2018 7:21:00 AM
Thank you Janice.
Date: 8/15/2018 10:52:00 PM
Such soothing beauty and appreciation is expressed with lovely rhythm, rhymes and imagery in your sensational lyric, Vijay. Congratulations on your excellent win! ~Susan
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Date: 8/17/2018 7:21:00 AM
Thank you Susan.
Date: 8/15/2018 12:00:00 PM
Wonderfully sung Vijay, you had me swaying to the tempo. Congrats
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/17/2018 7:21:00 AM
Thank you Pixie.
Date: 8/15/2018 2:07:00 AM
Very lovely, Vijay, congratulations on your win:)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/15/2018 7:34:00 AM
Thank you Jo.
Date: 8/13/2018 7:26:00 PM
A glorious write my friend...singing in the breeze...love & light...and super best for a WIN!...^WW^
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/15/2018 7:34:00 AM
Thank you WW.
Date: 8/13/2018 3:21:00 PM
I don't see the placement you got but i hope it was a good one. Congrats to you. I can see this was a winner.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/15/2018 7:35:00 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 8/13/2018 3:58:00 AM
Congratulations,Vijay on your win. Lovely flowing lyric.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/15/2018 7:33:00 AM
Thank you Subimal.
Date: 8/12/2018 7:25:00 PM
Nicely done Vijay..Congrats on your win..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/15/2018 7:33:00 AM
Thank you Joseph.
Date: 8/12/2018 7:01:00 PM
sweet congrats are in order, vijay... keep the pen glowing...huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/15/2018 7:33:00 AM
Thank you nette.
Date: 8/12/2018 4:03:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/15/2018 7:32:00 AM
Thank you Heidi.
Date: 8/12/2018 1:29:00 PM
So well done Vijay, you can see the amount of work you put into this, congrats on a fine win!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/15/2018 7:32:00 AM
Thank you John.
Date: 8/12/2018 12:50:00 PM
Magnificent poetry...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/15/2018 7:32:00 AM
Thank you Pashang.
Date: 8/12/2018 4:02:00 AM
Amazing poetry Vijay, ever so visual, you take one there..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/15/2018 7:32:00 AM
Thank you Harry.
Date: 8/11/2018 5:35:00 AM
Wow this is a sensational saucy poem on the breeze tease. Your imagery is impressively presented and this is fine epic style. Kudos. Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2018 6:44:00 AM
Many thanks. Yes--I will be sure to read and comment on your poetry.
Date: 8/10/2018 9:56:00 PM
The beauty of your sensual and poetic flow is breathtaking, Vijay.. your pen is a gifted instrument in your hand.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2018 6:44:00 AM
Thank you LM...appreciate the kind feedback.
Date: 8/10/2018 6:10:00 PM
I think you have that rhythm and rhyme down pat!! This is such a colorful song you created on summer breeze.
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Date: 8/11/2018 6:43:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. Looking forward to your song on summer breeze soon.
Date: 8/10/2018 1:42:00 PM
Courting with ease for sure. Wonderful write Vijay, sure to do well in the contest...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2018 3:31:00 PM
Thank you Charlie.
Date: 8/10/2018 10:16:00 AM
If you get any more seductive then this, you will be hard to resist. lol, You rocked it to the moon and back, Vijay, have a wonderful day dear poet.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2018 12:19:00 PM
Always a pleasure to read your comments..many thanks Pixie.
Date: 8/10/2018 9:53:00 AM
Our summer expressions differ, but we seem to share an enjoyment of its comforts. A very soothing and pleasing piece.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2018 12:19:00 PM
Yes--true. Enjoyed reading your poem. Many thanks for the visit and your comments.
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