Summer Breeze

Gliding on the hills of forests you arise
Awakening the dawn of sapphire sunrise
Riding with the winds, twirling in my trees
Your invisible form no one ever sees  

Softer than a touch, you're a seductive tease
Caressing my lips, like a romantic kiss
Courting with ease, you're my summer breeze
 
Blowing in my garden, gentler than the winds, you aim to please
Whistling on my walks, you let me breathe, a sigh of cool relief
Whiffing on the nectar, you liven flowers, flirting with the bees
Rustling the leaves, you buzz my air, my happy summer breeze

Hugging the expanse of emerald greens
Amber vegetation you flutter in the fields  
Waving turquoise waters gently you kiss  
Under the purple-skies donning amethyst

Softer than a touch, you're a seductive tease
Caressing my lips, like a romantic kiss
Courting with ease, you're my summer breeze

Blowing in my garden, gentler than the winds, you aim to please
Whistling on my walks, you let me breathe, a sigh of cool relief
Whiffing on the nectar, you liven flowers, flirting with the bees
Rustling the leaves, you buzz my air, my happy summer breeze

You go on picnics swirling with the kids
Flying their kites into lavender peaks
Soothing summer-vibes in reveling eyes
Greeting evenings of amber-fired skies

Softer than a touch, you're a seductive tease
Caressing my lips, like a romantic kiss
Courting with ease, you're my summer breeze

Blowing in my garden, gentler than the winds, you aim to please
Whistling on my walks, you let me breathe, a sigh of cool relief
Whiffing on the nectar, you liven flowers, flirting with the bees
Rustling the leaves, you buzz my air, my happy summer breeze

August 9, 2018
Placed 3rd in Summer Breeze contest by John Hamilton
NOTE: The sequence is: verse, pre-chorus, chorus
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Raven Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 10:20 AM
Hi Vijay, much belated congratulations on your win with this excellent poetic gem. A most creative work, giving the wind such a seductive quality. What wonderful visions fill the mind as I read this special jewel. A golden song from a golden pen Vijay. May your pen ever run gold. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike. A fave.
Callus Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 3:05 PM
Your summer breeze is blissfully seductive, Vijay. Belated congratulations on your win. Regards // paul
Pandit Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 2:49 PM
Thank you Paul.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 7:38 AM
Your lovely poem is exquisite Vijay! You give the wind personality that enchants! : )
Pandit Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 6:13 PM
Thank you Connie.
One Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 8:09 AM
wow.. great imagery... You did this very well.. It was like I was there..
Pandit Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 4:39 PM
Thank you Silent One.
Onclaud Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 7:27 PM
hello, vijay...are you on vavacy with your muse?... huggs
Pandit Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 7:23 AM
Not writing for contest..no rush..thanks. nette.
Melugin Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 4:14 PM
Vijay, Your Soft Summer Breeze sings a beautiful song that will hit the top 10 of the Billboard Charts!
Pandit Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 7:22 AM
Thank you Chuck..you are the expert my friend when it comes to lyrics.
Canerdy Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 8:19 AM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. This is SO beautiful, Vijay! Janice
Pandit Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 7:21 AM
Thank you Janice.
Ashley Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 10:52 PM
Such soothing beauty and appreciation is expressed with lovely rhythm, rhymes and imagery in your sensational lyric, Vijay. Congratulations on your excellent win! ~Susan
Pandit Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 7:21 AM
Thank you Susan.
Rose  Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 12:00 PM
Wonderfully sung Vijay, you had me swaying to the tempo. Congrats
Pandit Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 7:21 AM
Thank you Pixie.
Daniel Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 2:07 AM
Very lovely, Vijay, congratulations on your win:)
Pandit Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 7:34 AM
Thank you Jo.
Warrior Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 7:26 PM
A glorious write my friend...singing in the breeze...love & light...and super best for a WIN!...^WW^
Pandit Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 7:34 AM
Thank you WW.
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 3:21 PM
I don't see the placement you got but i hope it was a good one. Congrats to you. I can see this was a winner.
Pandit Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 7:35 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 3:58 AM
Congratulations,Vijay on your win. Lovely flowing lyric.
Pandit Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 7:33 AM
Thank you Subimal.
May Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 7:25 PM
Nicely done Vijay..Congrats on your win..
Pandit Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 7:33 AM
Thank you Joseph.
Onclaud Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 7:01 PM
sweet congrats are in order, vijay... keep the pen glowing...huggs
Pandit Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 7:33 AM
Thank you nette.
Sands Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 4:03 PM
Congratulations for your win Vijay :)
Pandit Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 7:32 AM
Thank you Heidi.
Hamilton Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 1:29 PM
So well done Vijay, you can see the amount of work you put into this, congrats on a fine win!
Pandit Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 7:32 AM
Thank you John.
Salehi Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 12:50 PM
Magnificent poetry...
Pandit Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 7:32 AM
Thank you Pashang.
Horsman Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 4:02 AM
Amazing poetry Vijay, ever so visual, you take one there..
Pandit Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 7:32 AM
Thank you Harry.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 5:35 AM
Wow this is a sensational saucy poem on the breeze tease. Your imagery is impressively presented and this is fine epic style. Kudos. Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too.
Pandit Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 6:44 AM
Many thanks. Yes--I will be sure to read and comment on your poetry.
Man Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 9:56 PM
The beauty of your sensual and poetic flow is breathtaking, Vijay.. your pen is a gifted instrument in your hand.
Pandit Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 6:44 AM
Thank you LM...appreciate the kind feedback.
Dietrich Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 6:10 PM
I think you have that rhythm and rhyme down pat!! This is such a colorful song you created on summer breeze.
Pandit Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 6:43 AM
Thank you Andrea. Looking forward to your song on summer breeze soon.
Smith Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 1:42 PM
Courting with ease for sure. Wonderful write Vijay, sure to do well in the contest...
Pandit Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 3:31 PM
Thank you Charlie.
Rose  Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 10:16 AM
If you get any more seductive then this, you will be hard to resist. lol, You rocked it to the moon and back, Vijay, have a wonderful day dear poet.
Pandit Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 12:19 PM
Always a pleasure to read your comments..many thanks Pixie.
Sharp Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 9:53 AM
Our summer expressions differ, but we seem to share an enjoyment of its comforts. A very soothing and pleasing piece.
Pandit Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 12:19 PM
Yes--true. Enjoyed reading your poem. Many thanks for the visit and your comments.
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