Curtis Moorman Poet Lyric

Summer Breeze

SUMMER BREEZE

Watch the leaves shimmering on the trees
Being brushed by a gentle summer breeze

The breeze that blows across the meadow fair
Bringing a fragrance far beyond compare

The birds are singing a summer lullaby
Hush now little baby don't you cry

The breeze that blows across the meadow fair
Bringing a fragrance far beyond compare

See the beauty of a summer sky so blue
Feel the summer breeze it brings to you

The breeze that blows across the meadow fair
Bringing a fragrance far beyond compare

Summer nights fireflies show their glow
Still the gentle summer breezes blow

The breeze that blows across the meadow fair
Bringing a fragrance far beyond compare

7 August 2018
For  the contest sponsored by John Hamilton

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Curtis Johnson August 12, 2018 at 6:19 PM Congrats, Curtis on your win. Curtis Moorman August 13, 2018 at 10:06 AM Thanks, Curtis! I appreciate your support.

John Hamilton August 12, 2018 at 3:57 PM Hey Curtis, congrats on a fine placement, just a suggestion a verse is usually 4 lines so your chorus wouldn't repeat so frequently, but then you would have to add a little bit, otherwise well done! John Hamilton August 14, 2018 at 10:06 AM Hey Curtis, Mark is the master of putting music to the lyrics, if you ask him he might do it, I'm also searching for music to be put to my lyrics. Take care! Curtis Moorman August 12, 2018 at 4:22 PM Thanks, John, for selecting my entry as a winning entry. I was told by another poet that you are the lyrics master -- his words -- and that I should ask you to consider setting it to music. What an honor that would be --- but minus the repeated chorus. lol

Gershon Wolf August 8, 2018 at 5:18 PM Here's to this nice lyric breezing its way to victory! Best wishes, Gershon Curtis Moorman August 8, 2018 at 10:04 PM Gershon, I hope you're right on this one. Lyrics are a little difficult in that they are repetitive in nature, i.e., repeating the same chorus after each successive stanza. Somewhat redundant, but I do believe that is what John is looking for in this contest. Thank you so much for your comments and your support.

Tom Cunningham August 7, 2018 at 3:06 PM Lovely lyric Curtis, with a summer feel to it. Good luck. Tom Curtis Moorman August 13, 2018 at 10:10 AM Thanks, Tom! It took a 5th place win, for which I am grateful.

Sand Blown August 7, 2018 at 3:00 PM breeze man