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Summer Breeze

We gather round as the musician plays Playing melodies of bygone days Some people start singing aloud As each new tune gathers the crowd Summer breeze caresses with her song Floating on the rhythm with warm embrace Lifting me higher as clouds sail along My fragrant rose in beauty's grace I hold her hand as she hums to the beat To the soulful melodies of a saxophone Which reverberate through city streets The weekend's here, how time has flown Summer breeze caresses with her song Floating on the rhythm with warm embrace Lifting me higher as clouds sail along My fragrant rose in beauty's grace ~ 8-5-18 Summer Breeze Contest Sponsor: John Hamilton

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 8/22/2018 1:26:00 AM

Graceful, precious poetry, written by an awesome poet! -JWE

Joseph May
Date: 8/22/2018 7:49:00 AM

Thank you JW

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/14/2018 11:47:00 PM

Back with Congrats on your win. Warm Wishes.

Joseph May
Date: 8/22/2018 7:49:00 AM

Thank you Anisha

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2018 3:20:00 PM

Yayyy, Congrats for your win.

Joseph May
Date: 8/22/2018 7:48:00 AM

Thank you Andrea

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/12/2018 7:39:00 PM

Back with congrats Joseph.. a great win.)

Joseph May
Date: 8/13/2018 12:59:00 PM

Thank you Vijay

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/12/2018 4:01:00 PM

Congratulations for your win Joseph :)

Joseph May
Date: 8/13/2018 12:51:00 PM

Thank you Heidi

John Hamilton

Date: 8/12/2018 1:24:00 PM

Well done Joseph, enjoyed very much, congrats on a fine win!

Joseph May
Date: 8/13/2018 12:48:00 PM

Thank you for my placement John

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/9/2018 2:08:00 PM

Lovely lyric. Nice verse. Nice chorus. All the best.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/9/2018 7:33:00 AM

Excellent Lyric filled with a perfect refrain. Enjoyed reading it.

Joseph May
Date: 8/13/2018 12:49:00 PM

Thank you Ravi

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/8/2018 9:08:00 AM

Easy breezy poetic summer nights...beautifully tuned my friend...love & light...^WW^

Joseph May
Date: 8/13/2018 12:49:00 PM

Thank you WW

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/8/2018 8:11:00 AM

Nice lyric, Joseph reminiscent of a lovely time:)

Joseph May
Date: 8/13/2018 12:48:00 PM

Thank you Jo

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/6/2018 12:50:00 PM

Joseph, this is my kind of summer breeze with lovely lyrics that transport me to wonderful, relaxing place and time! A fave for me and good luck in the contest, my friend! Hugs. Pandita

Joseph May
Date: 8/6/2018 2:39:00 PM

Thank you for making it a fave Pandita..Glad you enjoyed it....hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2018 2:19:00 PM

a beautiful poem inspired by a beautiful song. We oldies sure can remember this one!!

Joseph May
Date: 8/5/2018 2:29:00 PM

Lol..Yes we do..Thank you Andrea..