Summer Born

butterflies, then bees
lavender scent fills a breeze

wakening morning
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Puddifoot Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 7:34 AM
i like a bit of rhyme in haiku..this one paints such a serene scene, lovely! :)
Parker Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 11:18 AM
Not classic Japanese Haiku but gets the job done for Contemporary Haiku. Thanks, CP.
Nicole Avatar
August 4, 2023 at 4:10 PM
Let that lavender scent sway in the wind, so soothing it is, while intoxicating the senses. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy
Parker Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 2:40 PM
Intoxication can be dangerous...so many options. :o)
Chircop Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 3:11 PM
Lovely!
Parker Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 9:34 PM
Humbled...:o)
Manassian Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 10:30 PM
Awwwww... beautiful! That second lines carries the beautiful scent of this whole piece. Bravo!
Parker Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 4:36 PM
Thanks for your welcome comments, EM. ;o)
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