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Summer Born

butterflies, then bees lavender scent fills a breeze wakening morning

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Date: 8/7/2023 7:34:00 AM

i like a bit of rhyme in haiku..this one paints such a serene scene, lovely! :)

Arlo Parker
Date: 8/7/2023 11:18:00 AM

Not classic Japanese Haiku but gets the job done for Contemporary Haiku. Thanks, CP.

Date: 8/4/2023 4:10:00 PM

Let that lavender scent sway in the wind, so soothing it is, while intoxicating the senses. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

Arlo Parker
Date: 8/5/2023 2:40:00 PM

Intoxication can be dangerous...so many options. :o)

Date: 8/2/2023 3:11:00 PM

Lovely!

Arlo Parker
Date: 8/2/2023 9:34:00 PM

Humbled...:o)

Date: 7/29/2023 10:30:00 PM

Awwwww... beautiful! That second lines carries the beautiful scent of this whole piece. Bravo!

Arlo Parker
Date: 7/30/2023 4:36:00 PM

Thanks for your welcome comments, EM. ;o)

Date: 7/29/2023 1:28:00 PM

Mmmm.... Lavender mornings sound luscious

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/4/2023 4:04:00 PM

Lavender is one of my favorites fragrances. :)

Arlo Parker
Date: 7/30/2023 4:37:00 PM

Lavender scent can be so soothing for a poet.