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Placed Tenth

Summertime Premiere Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Regina McIntosh 

July 25, 2023

 

 

Summer Bliss

Thrilling summer hums song blithe in delight….
Lustrous flowers emerge in golden fields,
Festive abundance of colours in sight -
O luscious Beauty, how sweet fragrance yields!

Trees sway gleefully under crimson sky ~ 
Pleasing breeze brings scent of mystical past,
Quiet stroll in moonlight beaming so high…
Wish this flamboyant sublime weather last!

Blue Jays and Robins, butterflies, and bees, 
Summer offers us harmony and bliss,
Peonies and Daffodils flaunt in trees ~ 
Blush coy when at dawn dewdrops softly kiss!

Summer's stunning hue resonates year through
Blessed are we, under canopy of blue !
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Alex Avatar
July 31, 2023 at 12:06 AM
Such a beautiful sonnet! Congratulations!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 31, 2023 at 6:20 AM
Thank you, Chris. Delighted to share with you. Appreciate your kind comment.
Kauffman Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 10:04 PM
Congratulations dearest Mala! Your lovely sonnet resonates with summer joy in "swaying trees," "golden fields" and blushing flowers! So wonderful to see this delight on the winners list and share the podium! Sending you summer blessings!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 31, 2023 at 6:23 AM
Thank you, Dearest Sam. Summer is pretty in Canada, and in your place too. Canadians live through harsh winter looking forward to these three months. Your poem is always a delight for me. Love and warm wishes ~ Mala
Mitra Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 4:02 AM
Strong Poetry ode to nature
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 5:40 AM
Thank you, Debjani. So glad to see you back. Appreciate your kind comment.
Mcintosh Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 1:59 AM
Wonderful writing. I so love this. Beautifully done. God bless you and Congrats. Love, Gina
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 5:39 AM
Thank you, Gina. Really appreciate your placement. I am honoured.
Pandit Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 2:45 PM
Beautiful summer images, Mala. Much enjoyed the exuberance of your poem.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 3:41 PM
Thanks, Vijay. Your visit and comments are very much appreciated.
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