Summer Bliss

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Placed Tenth

Summertime Premiere Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Regina McIntosh

July 25, 2023

Thrilling summer hums song blithe in delight…. Lustrous flowers emerge in golden fields, Festive abundance of colours in sight - O luscious Beauty, how sweet fragrance yields! Trees sway gleefully under crimson sky ~ Pleasing breeze brings scent of mystical past, Quiet stroll in moonlight beaming so high… Wish this flamboyant sublime weather last! Blue Jays and Robins, butterflies, and bees, Summer offers us harmony and bliss, Peonies and Daffodils flaunt in trees ~ Blush coy when at dawn dewdrops softly kiss! Summer's stunning hue resonates year through Blessed are we, under canopy of blue !

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/31/2023 12:06:00 AM

Such a beautiful sonnet! Congratulations!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/31/2023 6:20:00 AM

Thank you, Chris. Delighted to share with you. Appreciate your kind comment.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/30/2023 10:04:00 PM

Congratulations dearest Mala! Your lovely sonnet resonates with summer joy in "swaying trees," "golden fields" and blushing flowers! So wonderful to see this delight on the winners list and share the podium! Sending you summer blessings!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/31/2023 6:23:00 AM

Thank you, Dearest Sam. Summer is pretty in Canada, and in your place too. Canadians live through harsh winter looking forward to these three months. Your poem is always a delight for me. Love and warm wishes ~ Mala