Brenda Meier-Hans Poet Rhyme

Summer Alouette 2

Smell the summer air
Blowing everywhere
Drying up the drops of rain.
In this seasons breeze
Wheat fields grow with ease
Barley, corn and sugar cane.

Sun is beating down
Warming up the ground.
Dandelion seeds float free.
Wild flowers with grace
Daisy’s happy face,
Waiting for a date with bee.

Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
08.30.2014
For contest A Lovely Alouette
4th

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Hija De La Luna September 15, 2014 at 5:57 PM summery write, Brenda! you brought me summer today, thank you! Congrats! Brenda Meier-Hans September 15, 2014 at 6:00 PM Thanks Hija

Paul Callus September 15, 2014 at 4:04 PM Hi Brenda! This is truly a lovely alouette, as the title of the contest suggests! Lively, sweet and appealing to the senses. Congratulations!! // paul Brenda Meier-Hans September 15, 2014 at 6:00 PM Thanks so much Paul.

Andrea Dietrich September 15, 2014 at 3:51 PM I just adored yours!!! I marked it down for the dandelion line. My syllable counter put that word at three. But just now I saw another counter that let lion count as two separate syllables. Sorry. This should have been a third place. It's so cute. Congrats in my contest. Brenda Meier-Hans September 15, 2014 at 5:59 PM Should of trusted me Andrea. I count with my brain, it works better.

Jan Allison September 15, 2014 at 1:13 PM Dropping back with my congrats Brenda this is a pure joy to read again:-) Hugs Jan xx Brenda Meier-Hans September 15, 2014 at 3:34 PM Thanks so much Jan.

Barbara Gorelick September 15, 2014 at 8:03 AM Congrats...love the last line, it made me smile. BG Brenda Meier-Hans September 15, 2014 at 3:34 PM Thanks Barbara, my favourite line too.

Connie Marcum Wong September 15, 2014 at 7:12 AM I really like your Alouette Brenda. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Brenda Meier-Hans September 15, 2014 at 3:33 PM Thank you Connie.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 15, 2014 at 6:27 AM Congrats on ur winning awesome write Brenda! It's sweet n lovely! Brenda Meier-Hans September 15, 2014 at 3:32 PM Thank you Dr. Sharma.

Jan Allison August 31, 2014 at 5:16 PM Brilliantly penned Brenda good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xxx Brenda Meier-Hans September 1, 2014 at 4:07 PM Thank YOU Jan.