Summer

SUMMER Summer is super and so are you Under the umbrella in the shade More fun, more sun More ice-cream and a bun Everyone is so fun Ride bikes and run. 27th June 2016 Joshua James Ward (Age 8)

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Grant Norwood

Date: 10/17/2016 10:25:00 PM

This is awesome. Takes me back. Well done Joshua. Dont lose the fun

Jan Allison

Date: 10/14/2016 6:54:00 PM

Many congrats on having your poem featured on the home page Joshua. It is lovely to read it again:-) hugs jan xx

Joshua Ward

Date: 7/24/2016 4:54:00 AM

Hello and so long!

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/24/2016 12:39:00 AM

A lovely little write, very clever, and a great first submission to this site. Welcome to Poetry Soup, Joshua, I'm sure that you will have a lot of fun posting and sharing and reading works with us. Enjoy. Regards, Viv

Joshua Ward
Date: 7/24/2016 4:53:00 AM

Thank you.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/23/2016 1:03:00 PM

You have a great talent for one so young Joshua:-) A lovely fun summer poem:-)hugs Jan xx

Joshua Ward
Date: 7/24/2016 4:53:00 AM

Thank you.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2016 10:01:00 AM

Joshua,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Joshua Ward
Date: 7/24/2016 4:51:00 AM

Thank you. See you soon. Talk to you soon.

Skat A

Date: 7/23/2016 9:48:00 AM

Joshua, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

Joshua Ward
Date: 7/24/2016 4:50:00 AM

Thank you. I hope you have a good day.