Summer

SUMMER

Summer is super and so are you
Under the umbrella in the shade
More fun, more sun
More ice-cream and a bun
Everyone is so fun
Ride bikes and run.

27th June 2016
Joshua James Ward
(Age 8)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Norwood Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 10:25 PM
This is awesome. Takes me back. Well done Joshua. Dont lose the fun
Allison Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 6:54 PM
Many congrats on having your poem featured on the home page Joshua. It is lovely to read it again:-) hugs jan xx
Ward Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 4:54 AM
Hello and so long!
Wigley Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 12:39 AM
A lovely little write, very clever, and a great first submission to this site. Welcome to Poetry Soup, Joshua, I'm sure that you will have a lot of fun posting and sharing and reading works with us. Enjoy. Regards, Viv
Ward Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 4:53 AM
Thank you.
Allison Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 1:03 PM
You have a great talent for one so young Joshua:-) A lovely fun summer poem:-)hugs Jan xx
Ward Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 4:53 AM
Thank you.
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July 23, 2016 at 10:01 AM
Joshua,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Ward Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 4:51 AM
Thank you. See you soon. Talk to you soon.
A  Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 9:48 AM
Joshua, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
Ward Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 4:50 AM
Thank you. I hope you have a good day.
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