Summer

Mood light and sunny Ready for some good party Dancing in the heat Nights clammy and wet Watching stars till midnight Love making so fun Days bright and so hot Out is the bikini suit Seas invite me in!

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Donna Jones

Date: 7/2/2014 8:27:00 AM

This is such a fun one to read and enjoy....congratulations

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/29/2014 4:17:00 PM

love the beat of this summer 'ku, anoucheka... cheers to you on your fine win.. hugggs

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/29/2014 11:33:00 AM

Hi Anoucheka, this is such a beautifully descriptive write about summer! Huge congratulations to you on your well-deserved win! Warmest regards.

Arlene Smith

Date: 6/29/2014 10:16:00 AM

congrats on a great win, Anouchita.. Hugs.. Arlene

Elaine George

Date: 6/29/2014 6:29:00 AM

Many congrats on yur win with this triple haiku. Elaine

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2014 11:13:00 PM

These little poems are sure FUN and SUMMERY. I especially liked that last one. I want the seas to invite me into them RIGHT NOW. Congrats for your win.

Weston Gregory

Date: 6/23/2014 6:29:00 PM

indulging on life finer moment.... very lived

Jan Allison

Date: 6/23/2014 12:23:00 PM

Three beautiful haiku each conjuring up wonderful images. hugs jan x