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Summer

green leaves shadows dance
sunshine blinds curious eyes
dripping popsicle

1in 4 - Choose your season, Choose your form
6-20-2014

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Date: 3/2/2016 8:41:00 AM
What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7
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Donna Jones
Date: 3/18/2016 9:41:00 PM
Thank you so very much for the kind words
Date: 7/29/2014 1:56:00 PM
Ahhh...summer. It's been a mild one ,too...thank the Lord. It's been a while, sis. I hope everything is okay with you and your family...? Anyway, I haven't been here but I've been thinkin' bout ya. Take care. Love ya!!
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Donna Jones
Date: 4/27/2016 10:15:00 PM
Hey just wondering if you are still around..hope life is grand...be happy lil bro and thanks for stopping
Date: 7/27/2014 9:52:00 AM
Great haiku. How well I remember hot Southern summers and the refreshing joy of ice cold popsicles. I have not had a popsicle in over 20 years. Enjoyed this fine write and the memories it evoked! Thanks
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Date: 7/22/2014 7:21:00 AM
Happy Summer Donna :) Have a good one :)
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Date: 7/15/2014 11:19:00 AM
I love grape popsicles!!!!!!!!!!!!! Also, awesome haiku! Finally, HI! :) I hope you've been great so far! Let us dance w/the green leaves! But, grape popsicles afterwards! :)
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Date: 7/13/2014 2:56:00 PM
wake up, donns.. almost summer!.. hope you are good..huggs
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Date: 7/9/2014 4:58:00 PM
Donna excellent image, love the new pic.....David
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Date: 7/5/2014 6:51:00 AM
So nice to see something from you. And it was worth waiting for. Great haiku. Sunshine and popsicles, now that is summer!
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Date: 7/4/2014 3:56:00 AM
Perfect example of a Haiku. I think you have a winner here...How are you my friend? - Tim
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Date: 7/1/2014 8:48:00 AM
Hahaha you remind me of my youthful years of that dripping popsicle..:) kudos..:D
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Date: 6/29/2014 8:00:00 PM
Hi Donna...I can feel the heat and see the ants on the way to the drips...congrats on this beauty
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Date: 6/29/2014 7:01:00 PM
Congratulations Donna. Hope you are alright. Many blessings... lucilla
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Date: 6/29/2014 3:43:00 PM
like i said, it's the popsicle, donns.. remarkabe all the way.. best cheers to you on your outstanding win... huggs
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Date: 6/29/2014 11:10:00 AM
Hi Donna, I extend a huge congratulations to you for your great win which you so richly deserve! Warmest regards.
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Date: 6/29/2014 7:40:00 AM
Congrats on a great win, Donna... Dripping Popsicle.. Genius!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 6/29/2014 6:45:00 AM
nice description of summer, Donna. Congrats for the win. Mohan
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Date: 6/29/2014 5:57:00 AM
This one goes to my fav's. Sensational description of summer in haiku form. Many congras on your win. Elaine
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Date: 6/29/2014 5:27:00 AM
Beautiful! I love this winning haiku, Donna! Congratulations on a merited win. // paul
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Date: 6/29/2014 3:35:00 AM
Congratulations on this lovely haiku taking top honors Donna!
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Date: 6/28/2014 10:35:00 PM
Donna, though the first line had two things running together, lines two and three were SO amazing. They were perfect haiku lines. Congrats for your third place win in my contest.
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Date: 6/24/2014 8:57:00 AM
Excellent. lovely summer haiku. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 6/20/2014 8:25:00 PM
Oh Donna you are back my dear, lovely little Haiku, will drop you a line later and catch up, good luck in the contest.............take care...........Vera.............
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Date: 6/20/2014 3:41:00 PM
beautiful summer haiku good luck with the contest. hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/20/2014 2:02:00 PM
donnns!,, missed you like my daily popsicle.. a winsome haiku with an awesome end line.. huggs
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Date: 6/20/2014 1:08:00 PM
Nicely written Donna, Perfect timing. So good to hear from you. Always enjoy your wonderful heart-felt poems and look forward to reading some more. Take care!
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