Summer

green leaves shadows dance
sunshine blinds curious eyes
dripping popsicle

1in 4 - Choose your season, Choose your form
6-20-2014

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Funom Makama

Date: 3/2/2016 8:41:00 AM

What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7

Donna Jones
Date: 3/18/2016 9:41:00 PM

Thank you so very much for the kind words

Painted Hunter

Date: 7/29/2014 1:56:00 PM

Ahhh...summer. It's been a mild one ,too...thank the Lord. It's been a while, sis. I hope everything is okay with you and your family...? Anyway, I haven't been here but I've been thinkin' bout ya. Take care. Love ya!!

Donna Jones
Date: 4/27/2016 10:15:00 PM

Hey just wondering if you are still around..hope life is grand...be happy lil bro and thanks for stopping

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/27/2014 9:52:00 AM

Great haiku. How well I remember hot Southern summers and the refreshing joy of ice cold popsicles. I have not had a popsicle in over 20 years. Enjoyed this fine write and the memories it evoked! Thanks

Saba Khan

Date: 7/22/2014 7:21:00 AM

Happy Summer Donna :) Have a good one :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/15/2014 11:19:00 AM

I love grape popsicles!!!!!!!!!!!!! Also, awesome haiku! Finally, HI! :) I hope you've been great so far! Let us dance w/the green leaves! But, grape popsicles afterwards! :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/13/2014 2:56:00 PM

wake up, donns.. almost summer!.. hope you are good..huggs

David Williams

Date: 7/9/2014 4:58:00 PM

Donna excellent image, love the new pic.....David

Monterey Sirak

Date: 7/5/2014 6:51:00 AM

So nice to see something from you. And it was worth waiting for. Great haiku. Sunshine and popsicles, now that is summer!

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/4/2014 3:56:00 AM

Perfect example of a Haiku. I think you have a winner here...How are you my friend? - Tim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/1/2014 8:48:00 AM

Hahaha you remind me of my youthful years of that dripping popsicle..:) kudos..:D

David Mohn

Date: 6/29/2014 8:00:00 PM

Hi Donna...I can feel the heat and see the ants on the way to the drips...congrats on this beauty

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 6/29/2014 7:01:00 PM

Congratulations Donna. Hope you are alright. Many blessings... lucilla

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/29/2014 3:43:00 PM

like i said, it's the popsicle, donns.. remarkabe all the way.. best cheers to you on your outstanding win... huggs

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/29/2014 11:10:00 AM

Hi Donna, I extend a huge congratulations to you for your great win which you so richly deserve! Warmest regards.

Arlene Smith

Date: 6/29/2014 7:40:00 AM

Congrats on a great win, Donna... Dripping Popsicle.. Genius!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/29/2014 6:45:00 AM

nice description of summer, Donna. Congrats for the win. Mohan

Elaine George

Date: 6/29/2014 5:57:00 AM

This one goes to my fav's. Sensational description of summer in haiku form. Many congras on your win. Elaine

Paul Callus

Date: 6/29/2014 5:27:00 AM

Beautiful! I love this winning haiku, Donna! Congratulations on a merited win. // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/29/2014 3:35:00 AM

Congratulations on this lovely haiku taking top honors Donna!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2014 10:35:00 PM

Donna, though the first line had two things running together, lines two and three were SO amazing. They were perfect haiku lines. Congrats for your third place win in my contest.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/24/2014 8:57:00 AM

Excellent. lovely summer haiku. Enjoyed. Tfs

Vera Duggan

Date: 6/20/2014 8:25:00 PM

Oh Donna you are back my dear, lovely little Haiku, will drop you a line later and catch up, good luck in the contest.............take care...........Vera.............

Jan Allison

Date: 6/20/2014 3:41:00 PM

beautiful summer haiku good luck with the contest. hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/20/2014 2:02:00 PM

donnns!,, missed you like my daily popsicle.. a winsome haiku with an awesome end line.. huggs

Vincent Flannery

Date: 6/20/2014 1:08:00 PM

Nicely written Donna, Perfect timing. So good to hear from you. Always enjoy your wonderful heart-felt poems and look forward to reading some more. Take care!

Summer

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