Summer

Hair gets lighter, Skin gets darker, Water gets warmer, Drinks get colder, Music gets louder, Nights get longer, Life gets better!

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Beata Agustin

Date: 2/5/2024 12:00:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/28/2016 1:12:00 PM

brooke, enjoyed reading your poem, Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. XOX -- LINDA --

Skat A

Date: 9/9/2015 2:54:00 PM

:) SKAT

Skat A

Date: 3/13/2014 9:34:00 PM

Hi Brooke, I was hoping in reading a new one from you... SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/13/2014 4:02:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Brooke :) - I choose your first nice summer poem -And hope you will write many poem in the future- I hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1 Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 3/12/2014 3:21:00 PM

great ending, Brooke, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 3/12/2014 9:54:00 AM

Awesome poem!!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/12/2014 9:13:00 AM

Nice, Brooke, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Jan Allison

Date: 3/12/2014 5:45:00 AM

Oh I long for some sun! Very entertaining poem. Jan

Larry Berdoo

Date: 3/12/2014 5:25:00 AM

This sings Califonia, happy to be alive!