Summer

I haven't seen the ashes all summer
Witnessed the flowers collapse into dust,
The violator rose's lavender petals
Dancing the breeze 
Through my bedroom window

I haven't felt the autumn rain
Nor caught a leaf or planted grain,
The garden shed's closed for the winter,
And the music band understand 
Six months shall wait till there next date

Spring shall break and summer fall
The crops shall fail reduced for sale
A tired sun upon the land tries to lend a helping hand
Raped for prosperity to profit the Deity 
The tears of our land can’t be felt by man's hand    
I haven't seen the ashes all summer!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Groves Avatar
November 9, 2009 at 4:01 PM
I love this time of year, the fall is my favorite. You did a very good job with this poem. I can actually see your imagery. The leaves turning to orange and red and falling to the earth.
Shahwan Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 5:59 AM
Interesting poetry.
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