Summer

These cold days are long,
Summer's around the corner;
Blonde and beautiful.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
September 14, 2009 at 12:31 PM
Blonde and beautiful doe's it for me, great Senyru>>James
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February 17, 2009 at 1:19 PM
Oh to be young. I got a chuckle out of this one. Living in North Dakota, I can attest to those long cold days. Nice perspective in this concise poem. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for taking time to comment on my haiku. Keep on writing! Karen
Neal Avatar
February 14, 2009 at 7:31 PM
It is a funny poem, your mind is creative. DN
Goombi Avatar
February 14, 2009 at 7:26 PM
Ha ha ha...this one is a good one. I agree with you.
Moreno Avatar
February 14, 2009 at 7:21 PM
Summer time is a great time, I can't wait for it............Danielle
Martin Avatar
February 14, 2009 at 7:06 PM
Nice poem, I love the metaphoric use. Tyler
Winter Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 6:45 AM
Aha! Double entendre here. Well done! Love, Shar
Neal Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 4:11 AM
It took me a second to get, like Raul I though it was a haiku, but it's a clever senryu. Love E.
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February 11, 2009 at 1:51 AM
isn't it!! beautiful... senryu, my friend!! ~ Arany
Edmonds Avatar
February 10, 2009 at 9:28 PM
Summertime is hot, might need a cold drink with her.....the Chief
Moreno Avatar
February 10, 2009 at 7:04 PM
I agree with your senryu. I thought it was a haiku until I read it. It was funny, your clever mind never ceases to please. Nice work and watch out she'll get you in trouble...Raul
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