Summer

It is cold outside I wish it was summertime Man, I miss summer.

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Date: 1/15/2009 7:31:00 PM

I miss spring and summer too especially with -30 temps here in North Dakota lately. I just found out that you are Raul's relative and that there are other family members of yours here too. It must be fun to have such a creative family. Blessings to you for sharing your talents with us. Enjoy your writing! Karen

Monica Engeler

Date: 1/5/2009 3:07:00 PM

I miss summer too. the days are just too short. Nice poem.

Lisa Cooper

Date: 12/30/2008 7:59:00 PM

very well said wonderful haiku

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/28/2008 10:08:00 PM

Elizabeth, YOU are well versed in Haiku I miss Summer too ALWAYS...HG

Robin L. Gass

Date: 12/7/2008 7:10:00 AM

Great Haiku and I couldn't agree more. Love Robin

Abe Lopez

Date: 12/4/2008 5:40:00 PM

summer is my favorite time of the year. i can identify with this haiku...very nice

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/2/2008 12:39:00 PM

i'll settle for spring or fall. jhl

James Foulk

Date: 11/30/2008 2:56:00 PM

yes me to. it is snowing here now has been all day. this morning it was 26 and a wind chill of 20. so i can relate to this wonderful poem you wrote. thank you for reading my if i could be and for your comment

Raul Moreno

Date: 11/30/2008 1:10:00 AM

Nice 5-7-5 flow. I miss summertime too...Raul