Summer

It is cold outside
I wish it was summertime
Man, I miss summer.

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January 15, 2009 at 7:31 PM

I miss spring and summer too especially with -30 temps here in North Dakota lately. I just found out that you are Raul's relative and that there are other family members of yours here too. It must be fun to have such a creative family. Blessings to you for sharing your talents with us. Enjoy your writing! Karen

Monica Engeler

January 5, 2009 at 3:07 PM

I miss summer too. the days are just too short. Nice poem.

Lisa Cooper

December 30, 2008 at 7:59 PM

very well said wonderful haiku

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

December 28, 2008 at 10:08 PM

Elizabeth, YOU are well versed in Haiku I miss Summer too ALWAYS...HG

Robin L. Gass

December 7, 2008 at 7:10 AM

Great Haiku and I couldn't agree more. Love Robin

Abe Lopez

December 4, 2008 at 5:40 PM

summer is my favorite time of the year. i can identify with this haiku...very nice

John Loving Iii

December 2, 2008 at 12:39 PM

i'll settle for spring or fall. jhl

James Foulk

November 30, 2008 at 2:56 PM

yes me to. it is snowing here now has been all day. this morning it was 26 and a wind chill of 20. so i can relate to this wonderful poem you wrote. thank you for reading my if i could be and for your comment