V. Deepa Poet Haiku

Summer

doused in sudor i 
leant to wall on exposed roof~
  pearl drips from my mug

   blooms sprawl scent in air
summer's bright days and short nights~
   flourished sultry breeze

24-6-2020

Third place in the Contest.
Note: Summer Haiku's Poetry Contest.
Sponsored by Tania Kitchin

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Aditi Mishra June 30, 2020 at 3:09 PM Excellent pictures of summer...pearl drops, blooming scent, long days, short nights, sultry breeze. This is beautiful Deepa. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love. Keep writing and inspiring :) V. Deepa July 1, 2020 at 5:04 AM Hi Aditi mam, Thankyou very much for the kind review,appreciation and blessings.:-) Best wishes for you too.:-) Much love~Deepa

Funom Makama June 29, 2020 at 3:08 PM A great Haiku. Congratulations on your win. This is well deserved. V. Deepa June 30, 2020 at 6:55 AM Hello Funom sir, Thanks a bunch for always cheering me with your warm words of appreciation.:-)Am pleased to know that my works are deserved for the win:-) Best wishes.Keep inspiring. Take care.Warmest regards~Deepa

John Watt June 29, 2020 at 2:56 PM Intriguing summer imagery. Congrats on your win in the haiku contest, Deepa. V. Deepa June 30, 2020 at 6:52 AM Hello John Sir, Thanks a lot for the kind compliment.:-)You are indeed a super motivator.:-)Keep inspiring.Best wishes for you too. Have a great day:-)~Deepa

Jeanne Mcgee June 29, 2020 at 9:36 AM Good Morning Deepa, this is a lovely write for summer...love the "blooms sprawl scent in air" so visual. Congrats on your top placement. Jeanne V. Deepa June 29, 2020 at 12:20 PM Hello jeanne mam, Thankyou for the lovely appreciation:-) I am pleased to know that you loved my muse.:-) Best wishes for you too.Keep inspiring.!! Have a great day:-)With love~Deepa

Vijay Pandit June 29, 2020 at 7:44 AM Excellent imagery of summer you created--BIG congrats on your podium win, Deepa. V. Deepa June 29, 2020 at 8:13 AM Hello Vijay sir, Thanks for your visit. I cherish your lovely appreciation..:-) Best wishes for you too. Keep inspiring us. Take care.Warm regards~ by Deepa:-)

Jenish Somadas June 29, 2020 at 2:08 AM flourished sultry breeze... Wonderful imagery Deepa.. Congratulations on your win.. V. Deepa June 29, 2020 at 6:07 AM Hello sir, Thanks a bunch for giving your valuable feedback.:-) I am pleased to know that my poem won your heart.:-) Keep inspiring.Best Wishes. Take care.Warm regards~Deepa

Jan Allison June 28, 2020 at 7:05 PM lovely images, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx V. Deepa June 29, 2020 at 6:05 AM Hello mam, Thanks a bunch for your kind review and appreciation:-) Best wishes for you too. Keep inspiring. Take care.With love~Deepa:-)

Eve Roper June 28, 2020 at 4:45 PM Congratulations on your win, Deepa. Hugs Eve V. Deepa June 29, 2020 at 6:03 AM Hello Eve mam, Thanks a lot for your constant support and encouragement.:-) Keep writing and keep inspiring. Best wishes for you too.:-) Take care.With love~Deepa

Tania Kitchin June 28, 2020 at 3:51 PM Deepa, congratulations on your winning placement, this was well penned and very creative! V. Deepa June 29, 2020 at 6:01 AM Hello mam, Thankyou very much for your generous words of appreciation.:-) I am glad to know that my poem was worth to be placed.:-) Credit goes to you for holding creative contests.Keep inspiring. Take care.With love~Deepa

Darlene De Beaulieu June 24, 2020 at 6:23 PM Hello Deepa this is a lovwly poem of summer. Enjoy your evening my friend. love Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu June 25, 2020 at 6:15 PM Hello Deepa, I will keep on inspiring you . Enjoy your evening my friend. love Darlene V. Deepa June 25, 2020 at 1:38 PM Hello Darlene mam, Thankyou for your tremendous support, love and encouragement.:-)Keep inspiring. Enjoy your day. Take care.Much love~Deepa

Andrea Dietrich June 24, 2020 at 5:51 PM Love the imagery. Nice alliteration too, Deepa. V. Deepa June 25, 2020 at 1:36 PM Hello Andrea mam, Thanks a bunch for your warm appreciation and encouragement:-) Am glad you liked it. I believe your doing well. Best wishes for all your works too. Take care.With love~Deepa