Summer

On the journey home The road winding endlessly Through the lush green countryside, My first day of freedom Cradled in the arms of summer. W.A CHOLT. Copyright Fergal O Reilly. 2013. Posted 3/4/19

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/5/2019 4:25:00 PM

Usually it's all about the journey, not so much about the destination. But you have blended them nicely! :) gw

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 4/5/2019 3:47:00 PM

good imagery and well crafted

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/4/2019 5:50:00 AM

And with that, I can feel the wheels rolling on the pavement; see the scenery rolling by like a tape only it has a better scent. Lovely!

Honestly J.T.

Date: 4/4/2019 4:32:00 AM

Nice words; nice imagery painted -JT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/3/2019 6:11:00 PM

How I used to feel all those years ago when school let out for the summer. Nice nostalgia for me.

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/3/2019 5:10:00 PM

Sounds delightful, WA.