W.A. Cholt Poet Tanka

Summer

On the journey home 
The road winding endlessly 
Through the lush green countryside, 
My first day of freedom 
Cradled in the arms of summer. 


                W.A CHOLT. Copyright Fergal O Reilly. 2013.

                  Posted  3/4/19

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Gershon Wolf April 5, 2019 at 4:25 PM Usually it's all about the journey, not so much about the destination. But you have blended them nicely! :) gw

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. April 5, 2019 at 3:47 PM good imagery and well crafted

M. L. Kiser April 4, 2019 at 5:50 AM And with that, I can feel the wheels rolling on the pavement; see the scenery rolling by like a tape only it has a better scent. Lovely!

Honestly J.T. April 4, 2019 at 4:32 AM Nice words; nice imagery painted -JT

Andrea Dietrich April 3, 2019 at 6:11 PM How I used to feel all those years ago when school let out for the summer. Nice nostalgia for me.

Line Gauthier April 3, 2019 at 5:10 PM Sounds delightful, WA.