Summer

waves of flowers sway
             as bees and butterflies cling 
                           slow dance of summer




Written on 5/12/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Marc Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 11:19 PM
I loved every line. Beautiful haiku Laura!
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May 19, 2018 at 9:41 AM
Love this. It's delightful and beautiful.
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May 19, 2018 at 6:16 PM
Thank you, Andrea :)
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May 19, 2018 at 9:24 AM
I love both your imagery and that slow summer dance, Laura. have a nice day:) Regards // paul
Leiser Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 6:16 PM
Thank you, Paul. :)
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May 16, 2018 at 8:35 AM
beautiful xx
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May 19, 2018 at 6:16 PM
Thank you, Daisy :)
Warrior Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 4:07 AM
A lovely haiku Laura...picture perfect...love and light...^WW^
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May 19, 2018 at 6:15 PM
Thank you, WW! :)
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May 13, 2018 at 12:15 PM
- A nice summer picture, Laura :) - GL in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leiser Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 12:53 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise :)
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May 13, 2018 at 4:19 AM
Lovely image Laura, just love those lazy summer days. Tom
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May 13, 2018 at 12:53 PM
Thank you, Tom! :)
DiMino Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 10:09 PM
A moment in time. Perfect!
Leiser Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 11:43 PM
Thanks, Joe! Glad you liked this :)
Waters Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 5:29 PM
lovely feeling of languor
Leiser Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 5:35 PM
Thank you, Virginia. Glad you got the feel of it :)
B. Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 4:38 PM
Such a lovely haiku, Laura!! So cheerful... Brava!!
Leiser Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 5:34 PM
Thank you, Robertina :)
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