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Sultry Summer Sunday

oh,  summer breeze,
     like an ocean through the trees,
     a cat, licks ice cream.

               6/27/2021


   Tania Kitchens Summer Haiku Contest

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Gershon Wolf

June 29, 2021 at 6:45 PM

I love every line of this one, Pangie. The contrasts are awesome. I foresee a winner here. Best wishes, Gershon

Panagiota Romios

June 30, 2021 at 10:01 AM

Gersson, you humble me. I do like this one, too. Say a prayer on this one. ))) Pangie xx

Elena Eagle

June 28, 2021 at 3:37 PM

This one was so fun to read and enjoy.

Panagiota Romios

June 28, 2021 at 7:52 PM

Hi Elena, aww you make me so happy Pangie Hugs xx

Michelle Faulkner

June 28, 2021 at 2:28 PM

Love the 'ocean through the trees' - I could use a cool dose of ocean right now :)

Panagiota Romios

June 28, 2021 at 3:06 PM

Michelle, I am with you. Torrid here. With you on the waves,, PANGIE XX

Richard Lamoureux

June 28, 2021 at 1:37 PM

smart cat, a great way to cool down. Hugs Rick.

Panagiota Romios

June 28, 2021 at 3:03 PM

LOL Rick...so, so true Hugs, Pangie

Tom Cunningham

June 28, 2021 at 12:28 AM

Can just picture the scene Pangie, a sure way to stay cool. Tom

Panagiota Romios

June 28, 2021 at 11:00 AM

It is! Pangie xx

M. L. Kiser

June 27, 2021 at 9:10 PM

Oh gosh, they can eat a ton of the stuff. Well penned and fun Haiku.

Panagiota Romios

June 28, 2021 at 11:03 AM

An honor from you to call this haiku, well penned and fun... So appreciated, ML.. Pangie and her cat , Irene xxoo

Regina Mcintosh

June 27, 2021 at 6:28 PM

Beautifully done. God bless you and the cat... love, Gina

Panagiota Romios

June 28, 2021 at 12:12 PM

Oh, I so appreciate your comments, Thank yo, sweet Gina!

Susan Ashley

June 27, 2021 at 5:14 PM

Dear Pangie, a wonderful summer haiku. Would that be Irene licking your ice cream, by any chance? I enjoyed the sensory imagery, and especially loved your last line. Warmest wishes and hugs, my friend.. ~Susan

Panagiota Romios

June 28, 2021 at 8:03 PM

Susan, Irene! How sweet you know her name,. Indeed she’s into ice cream and coconut yogurt. Glad you critiqued the haiku and liked that last line. I could envision her doing that. Tee gee. Sorry, I am late responcing, Pangie xx

Robert L. Hinshaw

June 27, 2021 at 4:59 PM

A "cool" write, Pangie! Irene has great taste if she is the pussy cat licking ice cream. Jeff is so picky - he won't eat people food but keeps me broke eating expensive cat grub! Bob

Panagiota Romios

June 28, 2021 at 12:10 PM

Bob...Irene limes ice cream and breads? I think she must have been raised in a bakery. Irene gets plentiful cat food. But loathes cat snacks? She is ger own person. Pangie xx