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Sultry Summer Sunday

oh, summer breeze, like an ocean through the trees, a cat, licks ice cream. 6/27/2021 Tania Kitchens Summer Haiku Contest

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/29/2021 6:45:00 PM

I love every line of this one, Pangie. The contrasts are awesome. I foresee a winner here. Best wishes, Gershon

Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/30/2021 10:01:00 AM

Gersson, you humble me. I do like this one, too. Say a prayer on this one. ))) Pangie xx

Elena Eagle

Date: 6/28/2021 3:37:00 PM

This one was so fun to read and enjoy.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/28/2021 7:52:00 PM

Hi Elena, aww you make me so happy Pangie Hugs xx

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/28/2021 2:28:00 PM

Love the 'ocean through the trees' - I could use a cool dose of ocean right now :)

Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/28/2021 3:06:00 PM

Michelle, I am with you. Torrid here. With you on the waves,, PANGIE XX

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/28/2021 1:37:00 PM

smart cat, a great way to cool down. Hugs Rick.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/28/2021 3:03:00 PM

LOL Rick...so, so true Hugs, Pangie

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/28/2021 12:28:00 AM

Can just picture the scene Pangie, a sure way to stay cool. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/28/2021 11:00:00 AM

It is! Pangie xx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 6/27/2021 9:10:00 PM

Oh gosh, they can eat a ton of the stuff. Well penned and fun Haiku.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/28/2021 11:03:00 AM

An honor from you to call this haiku, well penned and fun... So appreciated, ML.. Pangie and her cat , Irene xxoo

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/27/2021 6:28:00 PM

Beautifully done. God bless you and the cat... love, Gina

Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/28/2021 12:12:00 PM

Oh, I so appreciate your comments, Thank yo, sweet Gina!

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/27/2021 5:14:00 PM

Dear Pangie, a wonderful summer haiku. Would that be Irene licking your ice cream, by any chance? I enjoyed the sensory imagery, and especially loved your last line. Warmest wishes and hugs, my friend.. ~Susan

Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/28/2021 8:03:00 PM

Susan, Irene! How sweet you know her name,. Indeed she’s into ice cream and coconut yogurt. Glad you critiqued the haiku and liked that last line. I could envision her doing that. Tee gee. Sorry, I am late responcing, Pangie xx

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 6/27/2021 4:59:00 PM

A "cool" write, Pangie! Irene has great taste if she is the pussy cat licking ice cream. Jeff is so picky - he won't eat people food but keeps me broke eating expensive cat grub! Bob

Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/28/2021 12:10:00 PM

Bob...Irene limes ice cream and breads? I think she must have been raised in a bakery. Irene gets plentiful cat food. But loathes cat snacks? She is ger own person. Pangie xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/27/2021 3:42:00 PM

Hellopanagiota, I would like to see a cat lick icecream. Hugs xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/28/2021 12:22:00 PM

Hello panagiota, cats love ice cream! Wow! Who would have thought? Hugs xx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/28/2021 12:04:00 PM

Oh they love it, those cute pink tongues that eat Ana clean whiskers. Followed by paw cleaning of their cheeks..,love,y Pangie xx