Shani Fassbender Poet Verse

Sultry Summer

Heating begins with the rising of the sun
Greeting the tips of the tallest trees
Beating down to dry laundry on the line
Meeting high temps with climbing degrees

Wonder of your day at the beach
Under the protection of suntan lotion
Blunder not learning of the weather approaching
Thunder on its way coming in off the ocean

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Barbara Gorelick August 14, 2011 at 1:01 PM Good one! congrats on your win..BG

Debbie Guzzi August 13, 2011 at 8:16 PM I really liked how the verse BUILT! to thunder and the storm! most excellent write and thanks for your kind comments! Light & Love

Jack Horne August 13, 2011 at 3:55 PM Please excuse hasty congrats - I'm posting before I got logged out again. Many congrats on all your wins : )

Dr.Ram Mehta August 13, 2011 at 1:33 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of Rick, Shani

Lee Ramage August 13, 2011 at 10:43 AM Lovely poem Shani and congratulations on your win. So nice to see your name there Lee

Carol Sunshine Brown August 13, 2011 at 9:48 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest sponsored by ^Rick Parise "Lento Poetry" Shani. Love, Carol

David Williams August 13, 2011 at 8:28 AM hey Shani congrats on your win, David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 12, 2011 at 11:43 PM Congrats Shani on your exciting win in Lento Poetry contest with these brilliant lines of great expression luv.. also Rick asked me to pass on his congrats to u also ...

Andrea Dietrich August 12, 2011 at 11:42 PM shani, I love how you had the storm coming at the end. IT made for an interesting write about the beach. Congrats on your win.

Kash Poet August 12, 2011 at 9:49 PM Congratulations Shani on your win in Rick's contest.

Kabuteng P.Ink K. July 21, 2011 at 9:59 AM Really enjoyed reading this, Shani-- sure sounds like summer, and I liked how you ended this with the promise of rain, so refreshing :) Thank you for your comments in my poems :) and I hope you are doing great :D