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Sullen Shadow

in the depths of dreams there lurks a sullen shadow dreadfully daunting an alter ego with the face of transgression tirelessly haunting

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Date: 3/23/2021 5:24:00 PM

well penned, Jenna ~

Date: 3/6/2021 11:12:00 PM

May your dreams become lighter and happier. May you be the joyful presence in the dreams of another.

Date: 3/6/2021 4:42:00 PM

The darkness finds us all at times, some more than others.

Date: 3/6/2021 9:40:00 AM

I seem to have these kind of dreams when I'm feeling guilty about something. Perhaps I should try to be a better person. Hugs.

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/6/2021 9:57:00 AM

Don't fret, John. I'm pretty sure we all have this kind of dark night visit some time or another. Thanks for reading this one.

Date: 3/6/2021 8:57:00 AM

Hi Jenna, a very poignant senryu indeed! Take Care, Paulette

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/6/2021 8:59:00 AM

Hello, Paulette, and thank you for your kind thoughts.

Date: 3/6/2021 8:47:00 AM

I don't call them dreams but nightmares :)

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/6/2021 8:59:00 AM

You are correct, Victor, but 'nightmare' was one syllable too many for the form. Thanks.

Date: 3/6/2021 7:06:00 AM

I think we've all experienced those creepy dreams over time, are we actually seeing our dark side? ,Tom

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/6/2021 7:34:00 AM

Not consciously, but we have no control over our subconscious thoughts while dreaming. Scary, huh? Thanks, Tom.