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Sulis Minerva's Temple Spa At Bath

Offer Offer a donative Offer your prayers Look into the steaming water and know she cares Gaze Gaze at the golden image Gaze at the beautiful face Close your eyes and feel her in the holy place

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Elaine George

Date: 4/16/2011 10:07:00 AM

Beautiful! Jack. Many congrats on your win in John's contest. Lainie

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/11/2011 11:27:00 AM

Awesome write Jack! Congratulations on your win in John's contest ;)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/11/2011 5:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Jack in John Moses Freeman's contest "Praises of Life Precept". Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/9/2011 4:01:00 PM

Congrats Jack on your awesome win in John's contest with this lovely creation my friend.. enjoy another top ten victory with luv..luv..

John Freeman

Date: 4/9/2011 11:44:00 AM

As a man thinks so is he, is brought to mind byt your great rendition of my contest theme, Jack. Yes the holy place is the essence from which one will feel the power of belief within one's self. Congratulations on a great rendition of my contest theme and your fourth place. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/9/2011 10:57:00 AM

Can you picture my face lighting up as I see your poem in the winners' circle, Jack? Big congrats! Love, Carolyn

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/9/2011 10:37:00 AM

Yes God encompasses both male and female and may be as easily seen in the face of woman as in the face of man, in the beauty of a tree, or a small tree frog! All the earth and sky and all under it holy. Fine, fine write. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/9/2011 10:18:00 AM

Cngratulations on the fourth place win in the contest, jack

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2011 7:56:00 PM

Very different and I really like it!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/20/2011 10:42:00 AM

This is really lovely, Jack. Your admiration and affection shine in this poem. Best wishes for success in John's contest. (Spent all of yesterday fishing and had a blast!) Love, Carolyn

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/20/2011 8:07:00 AM

Hi Jack, could even be a picture of a Jewish Mikwe! Great composition of imagery!...Gert:)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/20/2011 7:45:00 AM

Here is the link for Goddess Acqua Sulis poem: Please copy and paste to read: http://allpoetry.com/poem/7176331

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/20/2011 7:11:00 AM

thankxx Jack ..appreciate the explanation.. Rome is a fabulous city.. these bathes sound surreal but so lovely to view.. wishing we could return to Italy soon but business keeps us planted home right now luv.. your words have taken me there on a creative cloud luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/19/2011 5:13:00 PM

Unique write Jack.. would like to know more of this write... nice use of the Didactic form.. good luck in John's contest luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/19/2011 4:42:00 PM

i have also written on the spa in UK of the Goddess Sulis but on the soup, jack