Suicide Thoughts

Got a gun and it's loaded
to his head it's pointed
but he won't pull the trigger
instead he took it to his wrist.
Nothing can save from the hurt
so he decides to take the cut
wasn't the 1st but I hope its the last
because every time he is alone
guess what is coming on...
His suicide thoughts.
He decided to go for the knife
after messing the good life
but he's living and still standing.
They think he doesn't deserve it
but the man above knows he's worth it.
This time he says he won't leave it
but instead learn to love it 
since you live and you learn
for himself he will yearn.
He still gets suicide thoughts
but he won't let it get to him.
Just cause she left him,
doesn't mean he has to leave him.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Wanter Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 11:14 AM
"She's" not the God who loves beyond all love. Nice "thinking it through" poetry.
Otieno Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 2:51 PM
I really love that "She's not the God who loves beyond all love"Thank you very much,it means a lot to me.
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