Suicide Really- When I Am In You

Came down from heaven,just to live in and 
to be with you.
My very special journey starts with ,
crying out of a womb,soaking myself
totally and in the ,whole you,
I'm the 'life' living in you,
everywhere and every moment  of time,
I'm really a beautiful present,with all
the world wrapped up in one.
I'm the sweet fragrance in flowers,cool and fresh breeze in the air
innocence in the eyes,smile on the lips,
love in the heart,music in the song,
flow in the river,I'm all if you
really care to see.
I'm in everything here,in the light and dark.
I learn,laugh,cry,tease,care,hurt,
anger,pain,love,relation 
through you.
Dear,look closely into me,u will understand,
why it is the way it is.
I'll be here only for a certain period of time,after that 
you cant let me stay and I cant either.
Kindly  do not throw me away from u before I am to leave.
Do not let my other side take you away ,when I am in u.
seasons change,time flies and I grow with u.
Never take me for granted,once I am gone
gone forever how much u may wish me to be back.
I am same but in diff styles in diff things,so do not
compare.
when pain n hurt comes,let it pass,
It makes me more stronger not weaker.
remember to love me always.
I am you,reflection in all u see,hear,listen,
feel,love.
Do not hang me ,poison or cut till i bleed.
the other dark side is not the solution
when I can solve.
have faith and perseverance,new good times will blossom,
I aint that cruel.
when hard times hit,I will be much more tougher ,to
handle  and knock them down.
spread joy and love within u n to others.
Accept and love me truly,you will see the
utmost beautiful and wonderful me,life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Makama Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 11:37 AM
Beautifully written with an explicit craft shown as obvious as the scorching sun. Great piece, a wonderful share and a blessed read.
Shines Avatar
February 6, 2015 at 11:51 AM
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your opinions.have a great day:)
Sathasivam Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 1:54 AM
Excellent. Well expressed poem. Enjoyed. Tfs
Shines Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 9:00 AM
thank you so much for reading.have a great weekend
A   Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 10:07 AM
Kenisha, this is very expressive.. The first thing I learn in life, was how to stay and stand tall.. ((with God by my side, in all matters)) You given yourself so much love and pride.. I like this person you strongly wrote about... I imagine it's you... Epic, and enjoyable... the beginning blew my mind a way.. Love it..Linda
Shines Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 9:27 AM
thank you so much for your words :).wish god gives us all ,the strength to live even when there are obstacles.everyone should love their life and not comparing it with others.
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 5:11 PM
what a great way to discuss the spirit vs. the body, or the shell for the spirit. You have a good concept of how it all works!!
Shines Avatar
March 27, 2014 at 8:53 AM
thank you so much for reading and appreciating my poem.have a great day :)
Dahlusion Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 9:46 AM
In this gothic-like imagery, and so perfectly constructed, the closing is light-filled and joyful. Bravo, poet!
Shines Avatar
February 7, 2014 at 2:02 AM
thank you so much for your beautiful words.
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