Suicide Prevention

On a harbor of restless shore
she scans across the deepened waves,
to end pain’s grim just like before...
as necklace breaks, in chilled farewell.

By edge of evening, time races
with hope to drown in circling tides. 
Not  a chance to hold stars’ graces,
a wish tangled in poverty.

Big dipper heeds her whimper, faint
as dazzling light soaks in blue sea. 
Until her child harks ,” Mom, have faith;
I'm here with you, through love’s glory.”

By questioning the bleak of life
her truth alights, now out of strife.



Suicide Prevention Month Contest
Sponsor: Laura Loo   Rhyme-- Sonnet Form
Re-submitted 9/16/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Scars Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 4:29 AM
lovely rhyme for such a poignant poem, loved it sweet lady. thank you and congrats ;)
La France Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 8:12 AM
Nette, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this amazing write
Devnath  Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 8:09 AM
Congrats on your win my friend. Sorry for wishing lately. Loved always, bl
Jones Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 6:00 PM
Oh my...now I'm crying.....congratulations well deserved top spot nette....sniff sniff
A   Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 8:22 PM
nette, another lovely win... PD
Kithinji Avatar
August 3, 2013 at 8:39 AM
You will join the Bard's Band- at this rate.
Sirak Avatar
July 28, 2013 at 6:13 AM
Stunning! This is a winner.
Gasun Avatar
July 28, 2013 at 12:41 AM
This is an excellent sonnet very well-crafted by your amazing & lofty creative words as always my very dear friend Nette! Thank you so much for sharing! Wish you good luck and best wishes always! Have a blessed Sunday there! love lots and big big hugs, Leonora
Horne Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 3:11 PM
wonderful sonnet, my friend
Tacito Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 10:37 AM
Your lines embrace all of life itself. All of the elements. In this case, family...damn. Great job!
Thomas Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 7:36 AM
Your words hold such beauty and meaning, the way how you compose & express, is truly touching!!! Thankyou for sharing....nette,,, blessings cherie...<3
Sivey Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 6:56 AM
This write is so beautiful I can't describe how gorgeous this poem truly is my friend! The heart surely obeys Nette!, within your poem it follows the "dazzling light, " and "circling waves!" I really enjoyed reading this tremendous piece this morning! What a glorious poem, a masterpiece you have formed! Great Work!!
Falotico Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 6:34 AM
Lovely Sonnet ...missed you... xxx Michael
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