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Suicide Note

I'm the last words You'll ever say No matter if it's on a piece of paper Or a video tape I'm the last thing you'll ever see While you're saying goodbye to your friends And family When it's too late They'll find me less than a foot away From your dead body I'm the note That'll witness more tears Than anyone will ever experience in their life time The sad thing is I only see that in five minutes In one single night I'm the last thing your mother will read While she's staring at her flesh and blood's lifeless body This is a cycle that seems to repeat A person can only go so long with the pain and the guilt and the agony Of missing someone they loved so deeply In the end the last thing on their mind Is if they'll go to Heaven or Hell Because of suicide I'm the suicide note I'm the last one to see you alive Or is that really so? The words you strung together Showed every emotion you felt in your life At the same time it seemed like you felt nothing It didn't matter if you hung yourself from the cieling Or blew your brains on the wall It's almost like You didn't kill yourself at allct

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Date: 4/1/2016 2:49:00 PM
Hi Kyleigh, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad.
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Date: 4/1/2016 2:04:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb win with this lovely write Kyleigh..
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Date: 3/31/2016 11:53:00 PM
Kyleigh Henderson, Congratulations on your Awesome Any Poem #38 win. Stop by my blog "GONE," drop by and leave a smile if you'd like. :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/27/2016 6:52:00 PM
A deep composition that goes beyond the surface...A masterpiece like no other...7+
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Date: 2/18/2016 11:27:00 AM
Anytime, Kyleigh.. LINDA
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Date: 2/18/2016 12:26:00 AM
Hi Kyleigh, WOW, that's one deep and tough write. I can't say I know what really goes through the mind of a suicidal mind. However, I can say, I stopped a few. Some of the emotions they would share are unbearable. thank you so much for this poem, you did well and penned the act itself uncertain... Love LINDA
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Kyleigh Henderson
Date: 2/18/2016 11:22:00 AM
Thank you I'm so glad you liked it. It really means a lot!