Suicide

She silently prays as she reaches for the chord

Wonder why the Iman didn't do this

I wanted paradise here and the quiet is deafening

Tick tock tick tock and her heart.......

She hasn't tried makeup as she keeps step to her thoughts

Outside of the mosque she awaits her destiny and strangers

They are mine enemy and thirteen hundred and eighty years

Young Mohammed and his brown eyes with smiles

Tick tock and the tick tock

When will that bell toll and the brown eyes that smile

The men get seven virgins and I am one

United States soldiers on patrol march by and the prayer

" Allah Akbar,"

She is torn and the mosque crumbles

A child screams as he holds a hand with no arm

And a car silently burns as people bleed

The mothers last thought is no pain and the hand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Duncan Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 6:17 PM
WOW,,,, awesome write,,,, ans so true,,,, you might want to inter in contest ,,,, you have a blessed day Patrick ;}
Miller Jr Avatar
July 8, 2012 at 1:30 AM
dang, thats deep
Collins Avatar
May 3, 2012 at 7:57 AM
"Tick tock and the tick tock" is so effective, Patrick. Suicide is stunning to the core. love, Kathy
O'Leary Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 7:15 AM
Horrifyingly wonderful poem... Terry
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