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Suicide

Sitting in a corner all alone No ones listening No one knows The pain you feel Or why you feel it Not that anyone would believe it "Your being overdramatic" they say "Toughen up" But you can't help The way you feel For your pain Is all to real So to end the pain You say goodbye To the pain in your life To things that hurt you so And to the people you will miss It seems like a dream One last motion, one last test And then it's done You finally did it You relieved the pain But you left behind your memories That will haunt me forever

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/14/2011 12:05:00 AM
for anyone who hears "the click" ...this is difficult to read...necessary...but difficult. i commend you.
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Raquel P
Date: 8/8/2011 6:45:00 PM
Thx
Date: 5/29/2011 10:10:00 AM
good :] i love the real emotion behind it
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Raquel P
Date: 5/29/2011 7:21:00 PM
thank u :)
Date: 5/29/2011 9:50:00 AM
it so sad how many ppl feel that way
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Raquel P
Date: 5/29/2011 7:21:00 PM
yes it is, I just lost a family member because of it. But thts he wonderful world we live in....

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