Suicide

Unsure of there feelings Lost in their soul But pain they won't admit The silent, and the unspoken Feeling helpless Suicide they will commit How do I know this? Why do I care? What happens to them Because I am one also Experencing the pain Suffering, and being condemned

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 6/5/2009 1:06:00 AM

Hi Jessica, I also understand this poem very much. Don't entertain the thoughts. Help is available. So, remember that option. And when you are feeling deep dispair, call the suicide hotline. 1-800-273-8255. Believe me, after God, and after making that helpful call, the writing is the biggest relief of all. God bless you, my friend. Let God have those feelings of condemnation. He can uplift you. Let Him. Lovingly, Dane

James Fraser

Date: 6/2/2009 2:36:00 PM

Very good poem Jessica, many a hurt has been endured by the families and friends, by this terrible path people take, i also wrote a poem about it called Suicide Mind. My school friend secumbed to this>James

Date: 6/2/2009 8:48:00 AM

good stuff. i think thats quite a good rhyme scheme there and also thats quite a good way of looking at that topic. well done. and also i would say dont worry about whatever problems u have but u probably have reason too. try and think about the brightside tho! :)

Brandy Megens

Date: 6/2/2009 6:21:00 AM

oh baby girl life only gives you what you can handle and death is not the only way out of your problems there is always a light at the end of the tunnel you just have to open your eyes