Suicide
She committed an act
Suicide its hushed name
Speaking out from the grave
Susurrations impede
Sucking, pulling like quick-
Sand, her family left
Suffering in her wake
Susurration/susurrations-whisper/whispers
Wake relates to the waves made by a boat, or as to arise or come to life as waking in the morning
Pleiades form but this form is not listed here
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