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She committed an act Suicide its hushed name Speaking out from the grave Susurrations impede Sucking, pulling like quick- Sand, her family left Suffering in her wake
Susurration/susurrations-whisper/whispers Wake relates to the waves made by a boat, or as to arise or come to life as waking in the morning Pleiades form but this form is not listed here

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Date: 10/13/2020 7:00:00 AM
Did you post this twice? I have already commented on it...
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Date: 10/13/2020 4:04:00 AM
wo- it's wondering me......enjoyed
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/13/2020 4:08:00 AM
Mahtab, So your mind is asking questions. Thanks for stopping by. Sara