Suicide

Behold the sadness in his eyes,
hear the sobbing, wracking cries,
now see his soul so ripped asunder,
his loneliness quakes like blackened thunder.

She'd warned him as they'd gone to bed,
one day he'd come home and find her dead,
he'd found the note tacked to the door,
and knew at once she was no more.

Chaos came with lights and sirens,
toughened men with hearts of iron,
breaking down the bathroom door,
found her lying on the floor.

His grief was so immense in time,
I knew that he had lost his mind,
His twisted mind conceived a plan,
and thus the end of time began.

Now years and years and years have passed,
my life just seems to last and last,
the pain is like a knife blade honed,
each day it twists against my bones.

I've lived my life lost in a fugue,
apathy my presiding mood,
I view my life from far away,
like watching a long and boring play.

He look his life, but had no clue
that he had taken my life, too.
I live each day and breathe each breath,
a zombie just awaiting death.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Augustus Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 1:58 PM
Congratulations on your win!
George   Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 6:46 AM
Dear Danielle, congratulations on your well deserved win. Suicide is such a tragic thing. Well written. Love, Laving
Richards Avatar
September 20, 2009 at 1:48 PM
Heart hurting poem, so well written. Well deserving a win in Constance's contest. Best wishes..Carrie
Moreno Avatar
September 20, 2009 at 1:34 PM
Danielle, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul
Brown Avatar
September 20, 2009 at 12:46 PM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest Danielle. Love, Carol
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