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Suicide

You stand on the roof. Do. You? Sun witness your jump. Should. You? Lets try one more chance! ..Too late. Forget and give up. Your fate. Ten floor to the earth. -Be glad. Meet shadow and taste. Your death.

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Nigel Fawcett

Date: 10/22/2008 3:10:00 PM

Really missing your poems, Marianna, and hoping we can look forward to further postings soon. Nigel

Nicole Bissell

Date: 10/18/2008 4:51:00 PM

I like your poem I used to want to jump actually I still do sometimes not because I'm depressed but because i wanna fall you left a comment on one of my poems saying thank you, I was just kinda wondering what you were thanking me for

John Loving Iii

Date: 10/15/2008 1:27:00 PM

no pictures e-mail jhlovingiii@hotmail.com glad to hear you survived because i've been there. john

Deneen White

Date: 10/14/2008 5:25:00 PM

such a sad and poignant write, take care D-nyce

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 10/14/2008 3:03:00 PM

Sad, but very well written. In response to your comments in my blog, you have to be a paid premium to be able to post a blog of your own on Poetry Soup. ~Trudy~

John Loving Iii

Date: 10/14/2008 1:44:00 PM

wow! great work. true poets know only a few words well placed makes a very big difference. you have that key. John H. Loving III

Michael Torres

Date: 10/14/2008 12:19:00 PM

Sad but true. Effective piece. Nice description. Sad tonic. blessings Michael

Christopher Higgins

Date: 10/14/2008 7:20:00 AM

Wow! Meet shadow and taste is powerful and hard to see. I feel the pain in this piece and I can see the impact. Great imagery.