Suicide

The point is
There is no point
That is the point
The choice is
There is no choice
That is the choice
And his own mad thoughts
Will be his last voice

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David Kavanagh

December 9, 2019 at 2:17 PM

Hi Thomas The point is? The choice is? Death offers more To these people Than life. Nice poem Cheers David

David Kavanagh

December 10, 2019 at 2:06 AM

Thank you Thomas Your reply explains the poem perfectly, and also enlightened me, Many thanks David

Thomas Sparke

December 9, 2019 at 4:28 PM

Appreciate the feedback and input. It isn't so much that death offers more but is rather a release when life is unbearable to the extent that death is preferable. So there is no point in living and no other choice. To them. Even if there is...