Suicide

The point is There is no point That is the point The choice is There is no choice That is the choice And his own mad thoughts Will be his last voice

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David Kavanagh

Date: 12/9/2019 2:17:00 PM

Hi Thomas The point is? The choice is? Death offers more To these people Than life. Nice poem Cheers David

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/10/2019 2:06:00 AM

Thank you Thomas Your reply explains the poem perfectly, and also enlightened me, Many thanks David

Thomas Sparke
Date: 12/9/2019 4:28:00 PM

Appreciate the feedback and input. It isn't so much that death offers more but is rather a release when life is unbearable to the extent that death is preferable. So there is no point in living and no other choice. To them. Even if there is...

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 12/7/2019 4:07:00 PM

So much said! Pointed potent little poem. Excellent!

Thomas Sparke
Date: 12/8/2019 10:37:00 AM

Thank you, appreciate the feedback

Thomas Sparke
Date: 12/8/2019 10:37:00 AM

Thank you, appreciate the feedback