Suicide

What if you tried suicide
And by mistake you up and died
Would the demons laugh while God cried
If you were to take your life

If you think, things aren't running right for me
Do you need to step out that drastically 
Wouldn't it be better if you could keep
From doing  harm to the one you call me

Doesn't tomorrow bring another day
A chance to better the come what may
A chance to act a chance to say
There's more to life that I can make

Suicide is not a step that's light
It's the short end of the rope, the snake that bites
The loss of the string on the kite of life
The mistake you make you make too late to find

It's the cowardly way in which to say
I can't make it through another day
Come what will, come what may
You need to live this life before it's too late

Because what you find with suicide 
It's also the ones you leave behind that die
Where the demons laugh and God cries 
When you can't take anymore and you take your life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Donnelly Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 5:55 AM
Suicide is such a tragedy as you well illustrate here, Mike. But I don't think one who takes their own life is a coward though. I think it takes a lot of guts/courage but instead of applying the courage to 'living their life', they choose the opposite, which makes it not only sad & tragic they end their life but sad & tragic because they don't know they have the courage within themselves to LIVE. Keep writing great works! ~ Artsie
Sands Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 10:27 AM
Well said , Mike! It is not the answer :)
Hoffman Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 9:48 AM
An excellent write Mike; suicide isn't the answer...prayer and faith in God is~Che :)
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